Buddha

hahahahaa you are too much! but i'm almost done with chapter 2 so it should be up by tonight!

Gracias mi amigos! The time is up though, the story is posted. Chapter 1 at least! LLL2:Bali. Hope you enjoy!!! As for cliffhangers...well it wasn't too big so I'm sure you survived! Sorry anyway! PS, how were the islands?!!!! Me encantan las islas de canarias!

I am SO sorry for the intense delay! It's been ridiculous! I have never had a more hectic week! :( I'm interviewing for a job so I'm throwing together my portfolio which is suprisingly taking way longer than it should - these new writings for the portfolio are taking up ALL of my time! Not to mention I've got three concerts to help plan/organize and I've been tutoring Spanish students all week. I truly am SO sorry! But these past few days - almost 2 weeks now - have been the busiest of my life! Please forgive me and trust me to have at least Chapter 1 up by...I'm shooting for Tuesday? I know that's a long way away...but this weekend will be monstrously packed. :wacko:

Glad to help and aways glad you're enjoying my work!

You're referring to Chapter 7 not including the Prologue - the Nole Woods one, right? - and I've caught that little typo - the "lawyer" thing. He is actually a dentist, that was a mistake on my part! Thank you for catching it! I've fixed it. (Let me know if you spot any more discrepancies. I am, after all, only human and prone to error ) And I believe you're correct on the chapter where Evan says "And I've never been with a guy before." But he has been with Nole Woods, right? I can understand where this is confusing because he seems to either be lying to Leonardo or contradicting himself...which one? He has in fact been with Nole. That is true. But as you know now, the experience was extremely traumatic - being outed, Nole's assault, etc. I imagined Evan as one who never accepted his homosexuality or admitted it to himself because of this experience with Nole which was both his first time with a guy, and his last time (since he met Leonardo). To me, it's like Evan tried everything he could to cover up/ignore his sexuality and forget his relationship with Nole - which was basically only physical. He went so far into the closet that even he seemed to forget and disregard it all. That's why in the beginning he doesn't admit to you, the reader, that he was originally gay before meeting Leo. But he is in fact gay. A combination of being in Spain - a foreign country where no one knows him - and Leonardo's good looks, as well as the instant, strong, powerful connection with Leonardo that makes him realize he's gay and that it's okay. It takes Leo to draw him out and admit that he's gay even to himself.

that's awesome - about his LA concert I mean. But I'll be sure to check him out, thanks for the tip!

Ahh where did you study?! It's an amazing place, the whole country is. So many different and climates and cultures - I love it. We visit every summer because I've still got family over there.

I'm really into Spanish/Latino pop right now - preferably Shakira and Enrique Iglesias. But I'm coming up empty for new stuff. I was just wondering what everyone's favorite tastes were, and, if you like Spanish pop....if you had any suggestions for me! Feel free to leave recommendations, too, even if it isn't Spanish

My parents moved us from Spain when I was 5 to the U.S.A. and I love it here, but I honestly miss ¡España! I'm considering moving back once I'm graduated college.

It's all coming along nicely! And I'm pretty sure both Evan and Leonardo will get the help they need Glad you like surprises, because you're in for some good ones!

Just wondering These are all large components of stories - relationships, sequels, and actually making your story palatable to readers - so I'm just looking for what's popular around here!

Seeing as my own personal Mr. Perfect must have perfect teeth to be perfect...I'd say a dentist. Something about that smiling man in scrubs leaning over you....

Ahhhhhh!!! That was SUCH a good twist! Insane! I love it. Psychological thrillers amaze me. Seriously, Frosty, that was really great! I love it.

Heheheee.. you have to wait and see what happens!

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