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  1. Thank you for reading along. I appreciate the kind words
  2. Thank you, love. I appreciate that.
  3. Jwolf

    Nowhere Man

    You sure can
  4. “Are you sure you don’t want me to come,” Davis asked from the driver’s seat of the squad car, parked at the top of the trail that sloped in a semi-circle around the park. “Yes,” I replied, unsure at all. Why was I putting myself through this torture? 24 hours before, Davis had given me a choice: to walk away from it all and trust him. To allow him to protect and take care of me. But I couldn’t just throw it all away like that. “You can stay here as long as you need to feel com
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    Chapter 13: Riley

    It's a bumpy road until Coop and Kyle forever. My guess is they'll get there, but I don't know how long it'll take them...
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    Chapter 12: Tanner

    The drama continues. I used to shy away from writing cutesy romantical stuff, but I think I have it in me.
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    Chapter 11: Ethan

    du nu nu nu.
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    Chapter 9: Dixon

    I always enjoy your reactions to the chapters. I haven't heard the word Twat in a while, but it's surprisingly accurate, I guess.
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    Chapter 20: Avery

    I didn't mean to offend your taste in Avril, but I think we can all admit cranking her at full throttle is a special kind of bad day, no? Thanks for the great compliment!
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    Chapter 20: Avery

    I don't think he's headed for a cliff. He's certainly capable of screwing things up, though, so who knows...
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    Chapter 20: Avery

    Yeah, he really fell off the handle there for a second, didn't he? I think he's getting it together again, though.
  12. The last chapter here, and then off to the List, maybe?
  13. Thank you so much.
  14. I don't think I've ever been able to write a truly rational character. I like people who are prone to making mistakes, rash decisions, and unexpected turns. Plus... I think that's where suspense comes from.
  15. I think he definitely had an idea what he would do before the altercation. When he started piecing things together, at least. Drama...
  16. Yeah, a lot about Trav comes out in this chapter, mainly the fact that he's love starved. You can't blame a guy with issues for trying. Can you?
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    Chapter 20: Avery

    Specimen’s Name: Avery Height: 5’8’’ Build: 140 lbs (slender) Occupation: Student (Freshman) Age: 18 Dimensions: 6’’ Over the next two nights, I discovered that guilt comes in many forms and fashions. It wasn’t enough for me to just feel guilty about messing around with Chase behind Spencer’s back. I found myself lying, justifying my actions, and generally turning into a shitty person. Looking back, I realize what a dark place I was in,
  18. You like Tyler? That's a change of tune. lol. He definitely is that love to hate or hate to love kind of guy, i guess.
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    Chapter 9: Fireworks

    He's falling, and we find out soon why he's so drawn. It's complicated, and sad. But hopefully it's good reading.
  20. Thank you There is definitely potential for that story to be either completely false or only partially false. Those are the only two options.
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    Chapter 6: Bacon

    I've looked at that section a few times to try and make it less confusing. My intention was to create a fogginess that the reader could feel similar to Trav's.
  22. Lol. Thanks for the review. Glad you're excited for the finale!
  23. Glad you're still enjoying it. The suspense continues... dum dum dum...
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