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  1. Thank you so very much. It's meant to set up what ends the whole thing. I hope you find the next chapter perfect too
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    Chapter 5: Stars

    I'm enjoying reading your reaction as you go on. Someone compared Tyler's witticisms to the dialog in 'No Country for Old Men.' Glad you're still enjoying it.
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    Chapter 5: Stars

    This review was strangely prophetic.
  4. That's a big compliment. I appreciate it
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    Chapter 2: Jesus

    Thanks for the review. You'll find out how Travis feels soon enough That's my way of rubbing my hands together and saying Mwhahahaha.
  6. They are called Single Wides. I'm glad you decided to start this little story of mine. Can't wait to hear what you think as it progresses.
  7. I promise that my purpose in life is not to torture you. The next chapter will be out soon
  8. Blindfolded at a roller coaster? Sounds intense. The last chapter will be out soon
  9. I can say with certainty that it is not the camping spot. Try again?
  10. When you meet someone for the first time, you realize that each person has their own voice, their own language. Even though we both spoke English, there was something about the way Detective Davis Fordham spoke that highlighted those differences. Having been with Tyler long enough for him to rub off on me, I realized I was giving the officer the same vague, one word answers that annoyed me so much about the nowhere man. “So he torched the trailer park in Easton?” “Yes.
  11. Travis does understand what happened. The question is what is he going to do about it now? And I'm pretty sure he can't take back his confession, so... stay tuned.
  12. Glad you're enjoying it. The goal is certainly to evoke that sort of old country vibe. Thanks for the review
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    Chapter 19: John Doe

    I love a good train wreck. And don't worry. Your prayers will be answered soon... possibly. Thanks for the review!
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    Chapter 19: John Doe

    I'm a bad man, how? And mini-spoiler alert: the circumstances surrounding Kyle's return to Sigma aren't as plain as they seem.
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    Chapter 19: John Doe

    It was an experience, but I'm not sure Cooper is going to become a regular down there... although, you never actually know. And thanks for the catching that typo
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    Chapter 19: John Doe

    I can tell you a couple of things without spoiling it for you. Rusty simply meant that the Sigmas are far from done with Cooper. They usually get what they want, right? And Chase is here for a while... do with that info what you will.
  17. Whats gonna happen... dun dun dun.
  18. Thanks so much!
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    Chapter 19: John Doe

    Specimen’s Name: John Doe Height: 6’0 Build: 170 (muscular) Occupation: Unknown Age: Unknown Dimensions: 7.5’’ Class the next day was a drag. Going out wasn’t the best idea when I had three non-consecutive hours of syllabus review and mild lecturing to sit through. If I had known anyone in my classes that day, I would have asked them to pick up the course packs for me so that I could stay in and nurse my hangover. The other th
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    Chapter 18: Chase

    In the spirit. 1. You hope Kyle's not on the rebound... 2. A big, big pickle. 3. Mwhahahahaha.
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    Chapter 17: Patrick

    Spencer definitely got the abridged version... wait and see where this whole thing goes. I promise it won't be where you expect...
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    Chapter 16: Bryan

    So, I'm guessing that when I merchandise the story, you won't be buying a #TeamRiley shirt? I agree that he set himself up. And that the ending was disturbing. Believe me, I debated just how far to take it, but I figured, why not all the way...
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    Chapter 15: Frank

    Thats a great compliment and I appreciate it. I know the bread and butter of any story is the emotions behind the actions, and I'm glad I'm doing a good job.
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    Chapter 14: Dalton

    Spencer is a caregiver, always has been. When we tackle his side of the List, I think we'll see just how much Cooper's antics way on him. Also, SMU is pretty big. I try to give Cooper a wide range of hook-ups to avoid any cross-pollination
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