The fact that someone agrees with Frosty makes me nervous. Just kidding! I won't spoil anything for you, of course, but the fact is the night gets darker before the dawn (or whatever that quote from Dark Knight is:))
Specimen’s name: Frank
Height: 6’4’’
Build: 240, built
Age: 24
Occupation: Property Manager
Measurements: 7’’
I was shaken awake by Spencer. At some point after I’d dozed off again, I had rolled over so that I was facing Dalton and breathing heavily into his ear. My arm was around his back and his fist gripped my morning wood. In the split second that I was awake but not coherent, I bucked my hips back and forth slowly, creating a hand job fr
I'm glad you stuck with the story Daddydavek. Some loose ends are going to get tied up soon, so you'll have a better sense of where everything is headed. Hope you're starting to enjoy the story and thanks for the review!
Although I can't tell you if your guess is right or wrong yet, I will say that I've already planned the fallout. It's going to be a shocker, I think I'll just go ahead and predict that. how's that for baiting you?
I hope I'm still successfully making Tyler equal parts creepy and intriguing. Also, they both have a sort of Stockholm effect on each other, so I'm glad you mentioned that. Thanks for a great review!
I woke up, unaware of how long I’d slept. It could have been days for all I knew. The sun shone brightly through the uncovered windows. If we were going to be here for more than a few days, I would insist on getting blinds.
I surveyed the room and noticed different flourishes lying around. There was a pair of jeans and a couple of new shirts on the dresser. Next to the clothes was a small television with antennas sticking out of the back. Where had this stuff come from?
I hobbl
I like that Spencer too. Watch for him to take on that roll a lot more as things unravel. Also, Coop's drinking becomes the issue of topic in a few chapters... glad you're enjoying it!
Specimen’s Name: Dalton
Height: 6’0
Build: 160, slender
Age: 20, junior
Occupation: Student (Business Major)
Dimensions: 7’’ cut
Kyle’s words were accompanied by a face that looked like it had been distraught. I thought about forgiving him right then and there, but it definitely wasn’t that simple.
“That doesn’t change anything,” I said stubbornly, even though I’d already decided that it did, in fact, change everything. This was mor
Glad you're still hooked. I love your reviews because they address the questions I try to embed in each chapter (if that makes sense... I like you to come away wondering certain things). More to come soon!
There was often a disconnect between the things I wanted and the things I knew I should want. Growing up, I never ate my vegetables, even though I knew I should. I just couldn’t bring myself to want them.
Ready to shotgun the truck and leave Tyler to deal with his own disasters, I knew I should want to leave. He approached the window slowly.
“Need a light?” he asked. A drop of rain hit him on the forehead and he squinted.
“I’m good.”
“Scoot over,” he comma