Wonderful story!!
I always loved Colton and Parker's story and when word came out that Jed would get his own story I was thrilled!! After sitting down and reading the full story( in one sitting I might add) I can honestly say, I loved it!! Buzz and Jedd started off rocky but I knew it would all work out, and it did!! I'm glad Buzz was able to leave an unhappy place and find love and family.
Excellent job as usual, Rob! I loved every moment of this story! And I cannot wait for more!!
Hey Renee,
I'm a little late reading this, but better late then never is what I say!
Anyway, I loved this story! It was nerve-racking and sad and but it was also really very sweet at the ending. I'm glad that the truth came out and that these two could work past it.
Cheers!
I am very excited to see two new chapters!!
Kevin and Cam are such a sweet couple. I loved the scene were Kevin proposed, it was romantic and perfect!
Awesome chapter!
I loved chapter 7! I totally understand Vik putting Damian first even if that means killing both their siblings and I understand why Damian's refuses to have anything happen to his sister but I really hope that Damian's decisions don't allow his crazy sister to hurt Vik! That would be very uncool.
Chapter six was another great read!! I'm glad that all of Vik's warriors are okay for the most part and I'm very eager to read the next installment!
P.S. Being bonded to someone like Vik sounds more and more cool by the second!
Hi!
I just finished reading the story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
I came to absolutely adore Sean, Vincent, and Matt. They were wonderful characters.
The story lines were always interesting, the supporting characters were great, I just loved it all.
Cheers!
This twist with Dante is fascinating and it's going to drive me crazy!
I mean as if there weren't many unanswered questions before.
I' can't wait to find out what the hell is up. It's all very exciting!
hahaha. I totally agree! I mean I understand why Vik's not telling Damian but I'm thinking if I was Damian and I wanted answers and Vik kept making me wait, I'd knee him in the groin or something.
Can't wait for more!!!
Hey Renee,
This was another fantastic chapter! I loved it from start to finish.
I'm glad that we're finally learning a bit more about Damien and Vik.
The beginning was highly amusing as was the scene where Vik licked Damien, which I thought was kind of gross, but Damien's reaction was hilarious!!
And the ending! You really know how to end a chapter!
I cannot wait for more!
Cheers!
I just finished reading the story up to chapter 48 and I'm loving it!
I read Working it Out a couple of years ago and was very excited to see that you had another story.
Hope to see another update soon!
Cheers!
No, I'm enjoying the way you're describing things in this story. I love how I can picture, for example, Vik maneuvering through the tunnel in the mountain towards the spring and then entering the chamber which hold a pool and Damien, just via your words.
Thankfully the only sibling I have is a younger brother who is also my best friend. But then again, Damian never thought Becca would turn on him... haha
Wonderful chapter! I just love reading chapters where my eyes are glued to the screen from beginning to end.
I'm loving how Damian and Vik's relationship is gradually growing and reading them interact is entertaining. And the ending of the chapter, fantastic! I wish I could have a visual of Damian's face, that would've been a hoot.
I can't wait for more!!
Cheers!
Interestingly enough I re-read this story a couple of days ago whilst it was raining, a brilliant way to pass up time.
My favorite character in the story was Levi, though I liked Blaine as well, and of course who could resist Ruff?!
I think my favorite scenes were the scenes where Ruff first entered the story and Levi and Blaine spent all that time together. I loved those scenes because not only were the two men getting to know one another but the reader gets a stronger feel of the characters and we start to see the relationship develop.
I love re-reading this story because its sweet and exciting and all around awesome.
Cheers!
Hi!
Thanks for creating this forum for Don Hanratty. I read his Working it Out series a couple of years ago and had no idea that he had written anything else.
I'm excited to start reading Belovèd.
Cheers!
What a fantastic first chapter! I was enthralled by everything.
Damian's shaping up to be a character I'll love to read. I feel so bad about what's happened with him and his sister. I also like Vik's character. Already he's saved Damian, his people seem to like him, and like many have already stated, he's mysterious (in a good way.)
This story seems like its going to be a great read and I'm super excited for that!
Cheers!
Hi Everyone!
I was introduced to this site by the fabulous author Renee Stevens.
I'm here as a reader and I'm excited to start exploring the site, the stories, and the authors.
Cheers!
Hi Renee!
I made it! Anyway I loved this story.
I've actually tried walking backwards inside my house and it went terribly. And that was in my own house where I knew the layout, doing it outside would have been a nightmare. I loved how, at the end, Chris had snuck in the bubble wrap.
I really liked the characters, Jerry and Chris, in this and the way they interacted with one another. They left a smile on my face from beginning to end.
Cheers!