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    A word: Xanax.
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    Dog and cat person here. I love my boys...
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    Hi everyone! So excited to see so much creativity. Can't wait to read more...
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    Chapter 8

    jlowen commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Handled the touchy subject well...Still a nice tenderness in the writing. Love the sarcastic humor.
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    Chapter 5

    jlowen commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Oh, all this sounds so familiar...still going strong here. Great way to build up the mystery. Dialogue is going well, but it seems maybe it could be slowed down a little? Like adding in more background noise, but sometimes I do this too much and the dialogue gets lost. At any rate, can't wait to read on...
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    Chapter 4

    jlowen commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 4

    "What to do when you don’t know what to do? Nothing, absolutely nothing." Love it...So true. Going great so far, can't wait to read more. I'd love some more physical description of Mich and Cooper, but maybe that's to follow. Hope this is helpful!
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    Chapter 1

    jlowen commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hey, this is my first review here and I'm quite impressed. The piece flows well and the story seems natural. Will read on...Thanks!
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