Nicthalon

Love it. Well written, believable dialog, realistic character development. This is a great read. I do have one criticism: Kingsley Shacklebolt, not Shacklebolt Kingsley. He'd be Prof Shacklebolt to the students.

Hurrah! I get to go re-read the whole saga for a third time. Not a bad thing, mind you. I am so happy to see a new chapter. I just can't wait to see this finished so I can ensconce it in my Kindle library forever.

Another great chapter, but for some reason this is the 3rd or 4th chapter to be posted in subscripted font. Makes it smaller than normal and hard to read.

the correct URLs should be "/christopher-p-lydon/" I've reported the issue with the problem and solution, so hopefully a moderator will fix the links. In the meantime, you can read it at http://christopherlydon.gayauthors.org/books.php.

Chapter 10 posted as one giant block of text, no paragraphs. Thought you might like to know. Damn shame nobody let you know back when you posted it.