Quey

You are all beautiful people.

Please, I need the next chapter like ASAP. D:

Flash him your boobs. Oh wait, that only works for girls. Maybe he's into manboobs lol Better not ruin the friendship by assuming stuff! Just let time do its magic hehe

I still think you need to split the next chapter into 2 parts. it's WAY longer than other chapters that u've posted.

Er, posting on behalf of Mark...... we're gonna postpone chapter 16 17 and 18 coz Mark said he wanted to just finish the whole story first with editing and all that before posting a new chapter. Im helping out with the editing now so hopefully by the end of this week, the story's gonna be wrapped up. Aaaand then we can post the final chapters all together. :D

Thanks for the new chapter, Mark!

GAH. Now I really really want to find out who the real killer is. I need new chapters like ASAP! I was like 'aww!' when I read the last few lines. I think Ryan is head over heels for Michael haha

Sorry I haven't been checking very often..... been kinda busy. Aaand thanks for the new chapter! Yay!

Aha, another chapter. Oh, but i'm beta-reading it so i already know haha Too bad you won't be able to update Mark. You'd better be back with like ten new chapters or something as compensation for making me wait.

I just know Ryan and Michael wants to get it all done and over with so they can have a little fun on their own without any worries ... really good chapter, Mark.

I joined because my friend bribed/forced/blackmailed me to join. nah, i was just kidding. But i found the site through him. Anyway, I love reading and I'm really into slash fanfiction and stuff, so reading gay/lez stories never bothered me. And since this place has really good stories (high quality ones i mean), it's a joy for avid readers like me! Plus some have really hot scenes, so definitely no complaints!

Nooo way. this is really uncool. Parents forcing children to go through these kinds of stuff is just bad.

There you are Mark! I'll have a good time for sure. XD (Btw, I love the emoticons here. They're really diverse and cute)

For some reason, I loved this chapter. XD

I know this is gonna sound biased coz i'm your friend and i'm the beta reader, but I really love the story so far! I really like how it doesn't just focus on Romance so it's really neat and the mystery keeps up the suspense. Just a few grammatical mistakes, i think, and some bits I think could be improved, but overall, I'm giving it an 8.5 out of 10!