**GASP!!** Oh wow, I didn't see tht coming. I was hoping that Michael would come to his senses and come back to Asher but did not see Tyler there. (Poor Tylr too....If he needs some comfort you know where to find me ) See if Asher would have just taken those text and calls this could have been avoided .....just wow!
It started out so nice. I really didn't see this comeing (or maybe I did~Michael can be an ass, LOL) I love the dynamics of their relationship, and I saw where you said there is a lot more to come so I forsee them working this out~ and hopefully jumping in bed!
Oh the plot thickens! What a place to leave us **gulp** ...just wow. I would bitch and stamp my foot that I want to know what happens but I there is already more for me to read. The only good thing about coming late to the party....off to read
I guess I'm on the fence about Michael, I want to like him, I think I like him but I don't know. There is something I can't put my finger on about him BUT Asher I am in LOVE with. I also liked the little jab ffrom Jonesie at the end, heehee!
Your writing and story telling is so amazing. one of the best that I've read. You can take 2 chapters with very similar scenarios and spin them in 2 different directions make each unique in their own. The feeling of dejavu gave me chills it was so increadable the way it came across. I'm LOVIN' it
What a facinating start to a new story. I already love Asher and a really good job of setting up the scene to let the reader decide if they like Michael (a lot look like they are on the fence) Can't wait to see what happens.
There are not a lot of F/F stories on here so it was great to read! Welll done, KC you did a beautiful job I like how you can bring so many different sides to each new story you write.
Best Hosted Story –
Nephylism “City under the waves”
Cia “Never more lonely”
Best Promising Story
Comicfan “The Strange Life of Jonas Marks”
CassieQ “Reach”
Best GA Stories
KC Grim “Shepherd Crook”
CarringtonRJ “Swoon”
Already posted!!! (Before computer got wonky)
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This is the rest of my nominations:
Best Anthology Story
Comicfan “Made for him” KC Grim “Take me home tonight” KC Grim “Destiny Diner”
Best Antagonist/Villain (From any 2012 GA story)
Amanda “Shepherd Crook” – KC Grim Liz “Swoon” - CarringtonRJ
Best Protagonist/Hero (From any 2012 GA story)
Gibby “Shepherd Crook” –KC Grimm Tibial “Reach” -- CassieQ
Best Story by a New Anthology Author
Roan “Serendipity” Yetti One “Can you believe it”
Best GA Stories by a New Author
Mann Rambling “Little Mann” PodiumDavis “The Journey of Jacob & Kyle”
(Big hugs to my buddy for helping me out! )
Hosted Story
Nephylism "City under the waves"
Cia "never more lonely"
Promising Story
Comicfan "The strange life of Jonas Marks"
CassieQ "Reach"
GA Story
KC Grim "Shepherd crook"
CarringtonRJ "swoon"
(Why is this all smooshed together???)
What an ending! I'm speachless... well not ttotaly I can't believe that I cried. that was so emotional the goodbye with gibby and tanner then his mom....WOW!
Well it looked like you figured it out so we got jipped this week I don't like Gibby walking off to talk with Scott, even if he begs, Gibby should ignor him. Stay with Tanner and his sister!
I cant believe this is coming to the end. I want more!!!! Feel free to screw next week up and post early I won't complain!
I guess your screw-up is our gain! lol, sorry the autopost thing didn't work~ no I'm not!
Next chapter is the swat team storming Satan's house and taking that bitch out. Oooooh death by cop! Please, please, please????
Can't wait till the next chapter, you have my permission to screw-up again and post early next week too
Wow, can I slap Gibby now? WTF? What was he thinking? Amanda is too dangerous to be messing around with her and now have to wait to fidn out what happens
Here's a solution to the auto-post thing, post before you go out of town! We won't complain that it's early!!! Honest!! BTW have fun, I know the kiddo is super excited!
Ok on the fence here. I really like the change in the dynamics of Gibby and Tanner's friendship but where can this go? Tanner touched him but is a single touch ever enough?
I like that Tanner looks at Gibby and not his scars. I do think that Gibby handled the "I'm Dead" news really well...too well...sounds like he might be in shock or something.
KC, thank you for adding your mom's journal entry. I know that she was very proud of you. This story shows how talented you are. Now back to Gibby and Tanner!
Smiling :D I loved this chapter. Hands down the best chapter so far. It started off making me mad but the end in the pool was so worth every second. You are a very talented writer!!!