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The Field of Love Chapter 5 The boys dressed and headed out to the field to warm-up. Brent was already warming up on the side-lines, in the pitcher’s bullpen. As Sammy and Tony started throwing to loosen up their arms, Andy Collins walked over. “Hi, Sammy.” Andy said as he reached out to bump fists with him. Sammy didn’t know Andy even knew his name. Andy, like himself, had been pretty much a loner since his mother died a few years ago. Except for Roger Banks, as far as Sammy knew, Andy kep
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Thank you so very much for such an awesome review! I'm glad I was able to bring an happy ending to this chapter. I know the real world is full of unpleasant interactions between people, especially where people are beheaded for their beliefs, beaten and tied to a fence to die for who they love, or just ignored because they are different. So it's good to have a situation where people can come together and be accepting.
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The Field of Love Chapter 4 Tony, true to his word, told his parents everything, including why Evan attacked him, but it wasn’t easy for him, nor was it without fear of rejection. However, what frightened him more was that Evan could kill someone with the way he had been acting the past few months. He had nearly killed his own brother. After he had told his mom and dad everything, Gloria tenderly brushed her son’s blond hair from his face. “My sweet baby.
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You're 100% correct concerning courage. Thank you James!
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Thanks Benji! More answers are coming, but then more questions are coming too. The police were notified, and the next chapter answers your question, I think
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I'm sure Evan will get what's coming to him, sometime. Tony's father may not understand what his son is feeling, but he does love him. I wish more fathers felt the same way. Sammy does have a tough choice, but he does have a choice, many do not. I don't think Sammy knows for sure what he feels or what it means. More coming Monday
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I think here's more to the story concerning Evan. I hope we find out. Life and love, you never know what is what until it is.
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The Field of Love Chapter 3 Weekends promise many things for a teenager. There’s the escape from the seemingly endless attempt by adults to drive knowledge into one’s brain, during the school year, but then there’s the seemingly endless chores parents have planned out for them, which appears to only exist to ruin their own plans. With teenagers, every emotion, every situation is magnified into life or death. However, Sammy wasn’t your typical teenager. Perhaps it was the fact he was
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To Kill a Mocking Bird is one of the all-time greats, no question about it. Small towns have both there good points and bad, hopefully here in 2015, people's attitudes have changed for the better. We'll see Thanks for an awesome review. You keep them coming and I'll keep the chapter coming Thanks Benji!!!
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Chapter 3 will be out tomorrow! Tony does have some problems, I too, hope he will be able to overcome them. I think Mike and Sammy are cute together as well. I also think there might be something there between Tony and Sammy. I guess time will tell that tale.
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Thanks for the review and I'm thrilled you liked it. I thought it was time for another story with baseball as a backdrop.
