Marcus and the Slave The day after Marcus returned was a busy one; Marius and his men were set some tasks regards the security of the farm and villa. Marcus also heard of a slave shipment, arriving the next day, so he put plans in motion, with thoughts of purchasing them. He had more than ample slaves at the villa, but he did have other estates both north and south that could do with additional help. ---------- Koen was back to following Marcus and responding to his needs. Fetching scr
One of the best Sci fi stories I've read in a while. Few have kept me enthralled from beginning to end as this did. All the characters were excellent. The story was twisty, turny and more twisty.
The story brought out a few emotions while reading. Luckily when I was home. Looking forward to more.
Tom
Well I'm gonna start here. Loved it. From the get go a great read. The characters were brilliant, the plot fun and the writing easy on the brain. My kid of story. Now back to the beginning
Cannd, thank you for the review, I had planned a little bit of Koen's history, but I might now expand on it. As for the relationship, that is about to hot up can't say anything else.Gracchus's problem is he is worried about his boss's standing in the community. A master and a slave in love, never can happen. Will he see the error of his ways? Will he be cause for trouble? Hmmmm
Randomness thanks for the kind words. Uploaded this last night and headed to bed so only found out the line break issue this morning. Need to talk to Myr or Cia about it. As I said to Loveofreading I think its a format translation issue. When I Paste it shows ok but after it uploads its one big mass. Chapt 11 is in writing so hope itll be up within the 2 weeks.
Thanks Loveof reading. Not sure what is going on with my uploaads. This is the second time its happened. All sorted now. I write in Pages (mac) and reformat to word then upload so i think there is a translation issue at upload.