Hi finally i started to read your story! i'm going to leave a comment after every chapter. so i'm sure the review will just describe what i think after a chapter without knowing what will come next . this was a great first chapter. and again it looks like i'm in a movie. i always love your ability to describe characters and surroundings. so it's easy to get up a picture in my head. so i see a Chase, driving in a two seater Mercedes talking to an over self confident Scott, talking about to mingle with some of the who is who from Chicago. and than , quit contrarian to this, you introduced Darla, that i dearly love already, and this place, that honestly helps people who are in dire need of a safe place or help from a bona fide Attorney. and finally you intoduced me to Kaleb, who still is a little mysterious.. ok, he is great with kids, has ""old "" parents, but other than that you didn't give much away about his disability...so yes, why did Chase even cares?? hmmm.. i had to laugh a little about the fact, that in the beginning you described Scott and Chase as different as night and day... but it looks like Chase and Kaleb are different too... so i'm excited to read the next chapter !! thanks, as always <3