Ryan Burke

wow, just wow, I can't expect more than that. You rock, Anyta

Um great chapters! You know, it's been my favourite story so far. Just love the way you wrote this one. Every ending of a chapter makes me curious to find out what will happen next and like 'urgh c'mon Andy, don't be a cliffhanger, I can't wait til next chapter!' btw, I really love Jack and Drake, they're so cute, but sometime both of them are so pigheaded smh

you didn't post new chapters yesterday..

Another great chapter. I really like the scene in Jack's bedroom, reading it made my heart beat so hard. I was like 'geez shit, stop being so stubborn Drakeeee and kiss him already' :-<

Urg >.< great chapter!! Hope you'll upload new chapters soon

wow, what an amazing story.! Can't wait for the next chapter XD

Wow, this short story is just awesome!! And about the ending, am I the one who feels that it's a way for Cy to release himself from his fear and those dark memories? Btw, I found the story itself is so sensual and flows in a slow rythmn. Nice job, Nephylim.

wow, I've just finished reading the last chapter. The story is fucking awesome dude. Love the way you built the characteristics of Haze and Black. Btw, this chater makes me giggle and feel warm and fuzzy inside ( er, exept for the appearance of Hayden's mum and those misterious photos, duhh). It was just...real and I can understand their feelings. To be honest, sometimes I'm not really okay, acting numbly and I don't even know why.. Er, just want to wirte a review cos your story is too billiant, sorry if it's lame and sucks