silentdreamer

So many things to wrap my mind around, lol. I loved the idea of another parallel story with Felix. Many interesting facts had already made me waiting for the next chapter. Update soon.

Fantastic Chapter but a short one. I was waiting for this chapter for past ten days and now I want the next one. @Emi- Even that pathway reminded me of Rama Sethu though that was made of floating rocks. I thought I was the only one felt that way. Glad to know I was not alone. I'm not even sure what Abraham did here. What's gonna happen to Axel? Is he gonna any more visions or that was a one time thing? Endless questions and mysteries and like Emi I think you're slow, please write faster, lol.

Amazing!!! I loved this thrilling chapter and the vision in the end was superb. so many mysteries are piling up one after another and that's exciting. Looking forward for you to post chapter soon!!

Finally, Ed and Zune met again after that night. I hope Ed actually remembers everything from that night and it's not all in just Zune's head. Keep the chapters coming.

New story! Yay! Promising beginning. Can't wait to uncover all the mysteries along with Axel.

I have nothing new to add to what Jt_hooks mentioned though I'm happy to get these no-cliffie chapters, lol, but I am getting a feeling that you are going to do something really wicked to these friends really soon. Fingers crossed!

At last Ed confessed his feelings. I was waiting for a long time for both of them getting back to their senses. I'm praying that Ed remembers everything when he come back from his homophobic father.

Very good chapter. But Zune and Ed's stupidity is irritating me to hell. I don't know when they will accept the obvious feelings between them. Carol and Mich didn't surprised me but Jake meeting Ron's parents did. Well, it seems Jer is good for Jake. And Steph need to stand for himself this time otherwise I see him getting hurt again. I want to see more of Ed and Zune. Let's see how long they stuck to their stubbornness.

I am sure Stephen is going to hurt again because I think Kev is still having feelings for Zune. On the other hand Zune and Ed are being stubborn and getting on my nerves. I mean it is clear to everybody except them that they are made for each other. And I think Jer should give some time to Jake to move on. His meeting with that detective was suspicious but I hope it will not come out as another disaster in Jake's or Zune's life. Update soon and let us know about my favorite characters!!

Zune and Edward are oblivious to their emotions. They are stupid. They both know what's going on between them yet trying to avoid the obvious. Jer seemed, as Jake thinks, shady to me but we no nothing about him yet. I love Jenny. She is as amazing as Carol. After a long time a chapter with no cliffhanger...keep them coming!

All the emotions in this chapter from the various characters was phenomenal. Stephen's anger, Zune's dilemma, Kev's helplessness, Carol's childish behavior, Ed's happiness, Ron's cute surprises and in the end a broken Jake. Ron died on Jake's birthday, what could be more heartbreaking? Kudos for another incredible chapter!

Stephen-is -back. Stephen is back! Wow! Just wow! Didn't see that coming. When I read this chapter last night I was really jumping in my bed, lol. I don't know what Kevin and Edward would do when they find out. I agree with Lisa, Michelle and Carol need to take anger management class together, lol. Sheila was mysterious. I don't want to know about her predictions, lol. Great chapter. Loving the twists in story so far. Will look forward for your next update.

Carol is awesome! she is great! She is such a loyal friend. Gotta love her. I am happy that Jake is back and safe though I am not very keen to see him together with Ron. Loved this chapter and awesome Carol!

Read all the three chapters last night which I missed. Granny was a character, lol. She played a vital role in Zune's recovery. Jake is great and Ed is a Jackass. Good work!

A very sad chapter. Poor zune, I'm sure Jake and Edward will help him together to come out of this trauma and this journey to Edward's grandmother will finally bring happiness in zune's life. Looking forward to this journey.

daryl is a scum and he needs to get punished for whatever he did to zune. can't believe kevin is not trusting him. edward is a true hero. can't wait for next chapter!

Can't wait to see the fate of Daryl, the traitor. I hope he gets what he deserves. What about Nine? Will he make a come back or something? Another fantastic chapter. Waiting for more.

It was a sad chapter. I felt very bad for Jamie, Casey, Rachael and her unborn child.You did a great job with this chapter, full of emotions. At some places you actually made me cry. Ma'am is worst than a witch. She's heartless.I wish instead Angie, Nine killed that Witch. I like Nine and Angel is just like an angel. I hope she survives. I hate that cliffhanger at the end. I Can't wait to know what happens next so update soon. Great job mate. Keep it up!

As Ninecila said, what an intense chapter. Poor Zune, I hope he gets out of this hell soon. Very nice chapter, waiting for more.

You are doing a great job here. I can't wait for the moment when Carol will know about Daryl's betrayal. She's gonna kill him. I hope Zune gets out of here soon but how? Please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now I know why you choose 'way to heaven' as title of this chapter. During first half I was not really happy with Zune's decision with getting back with Kev but second half was totally unexpected. Daryl is a complete asshole and I'm sure he would pay for it. But the biggest question is where the hell tattoo guy is taking Zune? Well all I can say is that it was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one so update soon and sorry for not replying your PM.

Hey K, you took a long time to update. I was waiting for this chapter for so long man. Glad at least you could make it. At first I didn't understand why you titled this chapter Stephen but the surprising end of this chapter justified it completely. I didn't see that coming. Now I wonder where would you take this from here. I missed Edward in this chapter. I hope to see him in the next one. After this chapter I don't think I like Kevin anymore. I liked Carol's guts and Jake's loyalty to his friend. Carol rocked when she grabs Joey's neck. That was amazing. Nice chapter. Waiting for more:)

Very emotional chapter, mate. I knew Kev would be mad at Zune but he would be that mad, I was not expecting that. You handled every emotion of all the three main characters diligently. Very good job. I would be looking forward for the next chapter.

I read this chapter last night but couldn't review so doing it now. I can't believe what you did. It was hell of a chapter. I liked the mature side of Ed who ultimately was the reason of patch up between Zune and Matt. The first fight scene between Ed and Zune was interesting. The scene where Ed waited for Zune the whole day was really cute. The description you gave us for the first fourteen days was perfect but the most interesting part of this chapter for me was the fifteenth day. There were many moments and lines I loved about that day like that handprints scene, the line where Zune says his favorite color was slipping away from his hands, the scene where Zune pushes Ed away and Ed kisses him again and again, the scene where that bracelet broke, you used a very good line there, something like 'beads of trust and love of Kev were scattered on th floor and bed, etc. I would say that every single thing you did in that fifteenth day was too good. And the way you ended this chapter was very bad Sacred. You shouldn't have left that cliffhanger there. I don't know what would be poor Kev's reaction to Zune's betrayal. And yes, the song you used was very much suited the relevant scene. I would say it was one of your best chapters so far. Keep it up mate and update soon. I will wait for the next chapter.

Whoa man! you ended that chapter at an anxious moment. Poor Zune, i can say his life is going to more messy than it is already. Crazy friends and mom, Loving boyfriend Kev, Intriguing friend (or maybe more than that) Ed and now to add on his problems his long forgotten father, get him a break dude, lol. I'm enjoying your story a lot and waiting for a lot more angst and drama, hehehe. Update soon.