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  1. silentdreamer
    'Last Surprise of the Night', very appropriate title for this chapter man. Carol's uncle is his father, I didn't see that coming at all. Poor Zune, I have no idea how would he deal with everything and how's Jenny gonna react to see her lover after such a long time. What turn, friendship between Carol and Zune would take? Lots of questions so you better update soon. Very nice chapter mate. Keep it up.
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    I'm sure Edward loves Zune. I have this feeling that he feels for zune and this feeling is beyond friendship. The way he was worried about Zune and didn't care about himself, i think I'm right. There going on many things in just one night, which is not over yet. This was the last chapter you have posted and I'm desperate to know what happened to Zune? Is Edward okay? Are the surprises for the night are over yet or not? will wait for the next chapter man. Keep writing.
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    First Kiss

    silentdreamer commented on sacredlove's story chapter in First Kiss

    It was an outstanding chapter man! Zune's first kiss with Mr. Arrogant and look in which circumstances. Joey was such a slut and at the moment I hate Kevin for hurting Zune. The best part of the chapter was that kiss. It was so perfect. But in the end you left that cliffhanger! Great chapter. Nicely done.
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    Three Promises

    silentdreamer commented on sacredlove's story chapter in Three Promises

    I have read all the chapters and just have to add my reviews. I liked the friendship between Becca and Zune. I wasn't expecting Edward would be so easily accept those three promises. I think he accepted them because he wanted to be friends with Zune or who knows it could be more than friendship he wants. The part where Zune splashes water on Edward was nice. The end was very good. Zune calling Kevin and admitting the half truth. Good job man.
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    The Portrait

    silentdreamer commented on sacredlove's story chapter in The Portrait

    I'm surprised to know that that woman on wheel chair happens to be Edward's mom, are you serious? Her husband , in my opinion, is a complete prick. She should kick his homophobic ass and leave him but it's easy to say and hard to do. My heart goes out for Edward's friend, Stephen. poor guy was betrayed by his own best friend. I think Zune mustn't hide anything from Kevin, it would create nothing but complications in their relationship. Anyway, it would be interesting to know about Zune's course of action.
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    Fire

    silentdreamer commented on sacredlove's story chapter in Fire

    This was an awesome chapter man. It was fantastic. You wrote this chapter well. I could feel the tension and chaos. But I didn't understand what that woman was doing in principal's room and that little question bank was doing in store room. I hope my answers would be ready in next chapter. Conversation between Zune and Kevin in the cafe was good. Poor Kevin, I don't understand how could he stand Zune's strange terms and conditions. I think Kevin is actually in love. In the end, I thought Kevin would be the one to save Zune but it was Mr. arrogant. I'm sure there's more to come about this Edward. Well written chapter.
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    Mr. Arrogant

    silentdreamer commented on sacredlove's story chapter in Mr. Arrogant

    I'm on my way to work so I decided to utilize this time and read second chapter. Zune is extremely brave I must say and that kick was awesome man but the one thing I loved about this chapter was Zune's mom, she's hilarious man. I couldn't stop laughing and my co-passengers were giving me this weird look, lol. In my opinion, Edward is hiding his feelings but who knows what's going on in your mind. Nice work man, loved it.
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    I liked the first chapter. It's been a long time since I have logged in and read and reviewed any story but it feels nice to be back again. I found your story through the pictures of your prime characters in the gallery. I must say Edward is really hot! I personally is of the opinion that Kevin said those three words too early. They've just met but I can't deny the fact that he's a teenager. I don't find Zune a normal teenager. He's very brave and honest. I loved Carol's bitchy attitude. Have to go to work but will be back to read the remaining chapters.
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    yeah......many a times but the most memorable one is when my bf proposed me........there were tears of joy in my eyes......it was amazing.
  10. silentdreamer
    my favorite quote is: "FRIENDSHIP is the first stage of LOVE & LOVE..........LOVE is the final stage of FRIENDHIP."
  11. silentdreamer
    Happy belated birthday KC!!!!!!
  12. silentdreamer
    Happy Birthday......may god bless you.
  13. silentdreamer
    I think Adam Levine is really HOT......
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