There are some good points above. I don't think the chapter was too dark. If anything, it may not truly show the evilness Buzz is surrounded by. We did get a glimpse, though. The killing of the little wolf was done well, IMO. They view him as garbage and treated him as much. So why get emotional about garbage? The cold, remote feeling was perfect. I was repulsed, and I should've been as a reader.
That she-wolf and her plans for their mating night? Just goes to show how cold she is too. She doesn't see that would be rape. Or doesn't care.
Powerful chapter, Rob.
~M