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    Chapter 23

    MuddyRiverGirl commented on Hasimir Fenrig's story chapter in Chapter 23

    A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! That was such an awesome story, not that your other stories aren't, because I love all of them! I have finished reading "Dumb" and I am currently waiting for story updates on "The Ardor!" Your stories are always very well written and I always look forward to how nicely your stories flow, and the outcomes are always amazing. My favorites of yours is your story "The Ardor," but I really, really love your other stories, including this one! I just finished and all I can say is that I am impressed and you have quickly become placed on my list of favorite authors here on GA! Thanks for writing such great stories, I look forward to reading more of them!
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    Chapter 9

    MuddyRiverGirl commented on Hasimir Fenrig's story chapter in Chapter 9

    What an awesome story! Well, not for Elyran or Maraki at this point in the story, but you have written a masterful piece, because you really get attached to the characters and completely absorbed into the story. You have a great plot line set up and your story has just the right combinations of despair, love, and a kind of tenderness to the way that the characters react. Both your main characters are amazingly well-written and I have really gotten attached to them, which brings me up to the cliffhanger! NOOOO!!! I must read more, we were just at the tension point I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter, and thanks for writing such a great story!
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    I loved this chapter! The service was really cool and I have decided that I am in love with Joey!! Your characters are really well developed and you build your story off of a really solid base, starting right from the beginning! Thanks for writing such a cool story
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    I loved the small lime-green print on the sexually transmitted diseases poster with the sister and brother, what a wonderful ending! Aww, I am so happy that the story played out like it did, thanks for writing an awesome story!!
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    Mr. Anonymous

    MuddyRiverGirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Mr. Anonymous

    Totally squealing, my brain has just been blown! Well, actually I was one of those people who knew that it was coming!! I was just dying in wait for you to come out with the info, and here it is! I am dying even more for some good sex scenes between these two! Yes, I was sooooo hoping that you would play it out this way, bravo! A very nice story that you have got going, I am totally going to continue to read, and I can't wait for your next chapters!! Great writing and a great story
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