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Oh my golly gee, I haven't been on GA in so long, and I immediately went back to this story to continue reading it and I am yet again hooked. When you got to the part where Gabri'el was supposed to be a part of their little twosome become threesome I was pissed, I was like, "Nobody better be separating Uzzy and Pasha! Nobody!" And now I am all like, "Damn, that is such a sexy combination. We need a nice threesome sex scene in here somewhere." LOL, hehe, my crazy emotions! :3 Still an absolutely amazing story and I will be watching for more! 0.0 (*whispers* And looking for a good ole threesome sex scene.) Shhhh, nobody heard that! ;D
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I feel bad for Will. What a shitty weekend. I don't like JJ at all, but what can i say? I never really liked the kid. Besides his Dad coming home, that was pretty cool! Thanks for another great chapter in a terrific story!
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I would really love to see Will get into a relationship, even though he is so young, with Noah, because I just feel like he is kind of falling for him and Noah seems like a great guy! It would also be good, I think, for Will to be in a good relationship with a good guy, even if it is only temporary, because with his age he should date around and test the relationship waters, instead of just sleeping around! Another amazing chapter in a great story, so thank you!
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Chapter 6 - Fear and Humiliation
MuddyRiverGirl commented on Enpassant's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Fear and Humiliation
I knew that it was Amanda! The bitch! I knew it when Steve was saying how he was bisexual and then Amanda got all pissed and still and it was like she expected Steve to date him and that is not true! D: How dare she! Well, anyway, I love this story and am an avid follower and will continue to love your every chapter and wait earnestly for them! -
I don't like Gabri’el at ALL! But otherwise than that I was very happy with the fact that Uzziel pulled away FINALLY (Yeah, it pissed me off when poor Pasha just had to sit there while his lover angel was kissed by another AND WAS FINE WITH IT! I just don't know what was wrong with Uzziel then! ) and swore Gabri'el off and I AM SO HAPPY THAT HE UNLOCKED HIMSELF! :'D I can't wait for the next chapter Nephylim! ...Like you should post the next chapter sooner, hehe! Just kidding! <3 Thanks for a great story!
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SEXY TIMES! *happy dance* WOOT!
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Hmmm. Riley. I like the character already. My dogs name was Riley, so Riley's are good people! Yelling at the poor nurse. Now I am wondering what happened. What happened to Kyle and Riley to separate the two of them? What is with the whole "survived" and "dead" deal? ...Was there a zombie apocalypse that I am not aware of? HAS KYLE BEEN TURNED INTO A ZOMBIE?! Anyway, haha, I think that I will love this story and I am off to bed like a herd of zombie yodeling guinea pigs!
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Wow... ...Just wow. This is the one of the most amazing stories that I have read on this website since I joined a while back! This is a wonderful piece of written art and your characters are so well-developed and the plot is just incredible! Thank you so much for writing this story for us readers!! ...And I knew you wouldn't kill Mira off! He is just too good and cool for all of that!
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Chapter 11 - Open for me
MuddyRiverGirl commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Open for me
I love this story so much! <33333 It is just such a good story! I am glad that Pasha is finally at ease with the angel and that they are loving each other Very sweet story so far that I am enjoying reading. I can't wait for Angel to remember where he came from and who he is, but another part of my mind remembers the men that came to their house. I know that something bad will happen with those men and where Angel came from, but what happens will happen! I am just happy that they are together and happy at the moment! -
Chapter 9 - You're Mine
MuddyRiverGirl commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 9 - You're Mine
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! This story is just so good! I love it so much! How did I just find this now? I commandeth you to make another chapter! xD Just kidding, but I do love this so far and I can't wait to see what they do with this newfound "connection" of theirs!! If you know what I mean... haha -
Wahhhhh! I am like, crying on my bed right now after reading that chapter! Now Gibby is mad at Tanner and Tanner is sad and guilty about the note. :'( I need another happy chapter, one which has Amanda killed and justice served! I do love this story, though, and I will continue to read every Monday and hope that the story improves as in Tanners and Gibbys relationship. Which just took bad turn, but this was a very sad chapter! Tanner coming back to the house with his dad and sister there, then the note, and then the tears! Another great chapter, just not the happiest Thanks for writing, though, KC
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I just wanted to inform you as to how brilliant your story is! It flows together incredibly nicely and I am left wanting the next chapter everytime. Your characters are very well formed and I really do hope that the two men can be together. I am worried about what the new child will bring into all of this, but I hope to see a happy ending Thanks for writing
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Sooo, ready to kill Amanda.... YES! I don't like Ethan, but I pity him, because he is (or was, at least) Amanda's boy-toy. I actually loved this chapter, though, because Tanner was in this chapter and I loved that he remembered and told Gibby, because then they can take action! And I like how Gibby and Tanner can... "interact" more now, hehe
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Finally! Another GREAT chapter produced for the readers consumption. Oh, and I loved this chapter a ton, I actually think that this was my favorite chapter so far! I love how Tanner can touch Gibby now and sutff. I also liked when Tanner randomly popped up behind Gibby! Overall, very happy with this chapter and craving another one
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I loved this one! Very nicely written, and the words flowed smoothly. Plus, I loved it because I love rafting!! (Favorite hobby!)
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Three words... I HEART TANNER! I still despise Amanda, and I don't know what to think of Ethan, he seems like a nut kind of because he totally and completely flipped out about his girlfriend, instead of taking it like a man! I love this story, though, and this chapter was great!!
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I just love this story, its characters, and the plotline! I am so hobby that Will got the email from his dad and LOVE the relationship that we have got from Jeff and Wade Thanks for writing!
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Ooooooh, I love Tanned already... maybe a future relationship or at least a new friend? That would be nice, oh, and about Amanda getting bitch-slapped....LET'S DO IT! That would make my day if something bad happened to her! Oh, and I love the science teacher, too. Poor Gibby, though, life is tough for the little man right now Thanks for writing, as always!
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Ok, that was just amazing! This is my favorite Carthera story anyway, and I have re-read this story because I loved it so much, but this chapter was awesome and sexy!! I am wondering still about what is happening with Ellis and how his body is changing, but I love Davis too and I hope nothing bad happens to either of them, because both seem to end up being in fights! I love their relationship and I can't wait to read more!!!
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A very, very touching chapter, I live how the family accepted them as a couple with no problems, and I am also happy that their relationship is stable. Eleryn teaching the kids was very kind and you have just got to love Maraki because of his "gentle giant" ways. As always, I can't wait for more, please update soon!!
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Chapter 3: Bobby's Story
MuddyRiverGirl commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 3: Bobby's Story
Very nice chapter,you explained more in it, which helped a lot! I am now left to wondering about Gary's and Nemesis's relationship, I wonder when Nemesis will tell Gary about who he really is, and how he is actually an adult on the inside. I also am wondering about Bobby's interactions with them... Overall, I really liked this chapter and I can't wait for more on this story! -
Chapter 2: Retribution is Job One
MuddyRiverGirl commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 2: Retribution is Job One
Hmm, very interesting story so far, a very good read... I wonder what will happen, this story sort of caught me off guard when it started right off with the Nemesis boy. I like it, though, because it is unusual and I can't wait to see what will occur next, maybe a romance farther down the story or more on exactly what the man-now-Nemesis's job is. I have some quests from the story, though... 1.) What exactly is the Nemesis's job? 2.) Why did Death make the comments that it did? 3.) How do real, human people see the Nemesis? Sorry that I am confused on your storyline, it was fabulous and I bet more excelled readers could understand it, but I am one of those readers who gets confused easily with stories like this! Thanks!! -
YAH, I am so happy! XD I am greatful that Maraki didn't keep pushing away from him, and I am happy that they are back together again! I can't wait for more of their relationship and finding out about what happened between when he went unconscious and when he woke up. Thanks for another great chapters
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NOOOOO! I need the next chapter, I need to read about Maraki and what happens next!! Overall, a really interesting chapter, it was a good read. All I can ask is, please post the next chapter soon! This is my new favorite story, I love it, and I can't wait to see what happens next
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Wow, I just LOVE your Harry Potter stories, they are amazing! Your writing is always fluent and you have the perfect amount of detail and romance/suspense/humor / and action!! You never seem to fail in exceedingly impressing the reader with your stories, and you perfect the wizarding world. You seem to have every character down to a "T," and always satisfy with the perfectly long enough chapter. Thanks so much for writing!!!
