Night Vision

Such a beautiful story! It's definitely going onto my list of stories I re-read - and that doesn't happen a lot Thank you Hamen for such an amazingly, powerful, breathtaking, nail-biting, inspirational, and just all around an emotionally moving story. Here's to hoping there is a sequel to this story! Not sure if I'll make it without one Awesome work

First of al, the title nearly killed me... I was teary-eyed all the way through it! So I guess it's safe to say that we found Luke's killer? The chapter was very powerful I must say - Thank you for that! You did a great job with the some of the feelings of uncertainty hanging between Derek and Charlie. Now onward to the finale... I can't wait! Another great chapter Hamen!

It's the way Derek is still thinking of Charlie and whether he's happy, even though he himself is hurting inside. I wonder if things will ever be 'normal' between the two of them again. I guess I will just have to wait and see! I am curious as to see how this new twist in the plot with Derek and he's uncle will turn out. You sure know how to keep me in suspense Lovely chapter! By the way, how many chapters are left?

I just received the notification via email about the new chapter and I'm so excited to read it! ... I think I'll take my time and savor this chapter as there aren't that many left!!

Another incredible chapter! One of the many things I love about this story is how it has this way to make me FEEL what I read. I can't wait to read on what happens next! Well done Hamen!