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reading this chapter felt like watching porn. i might consider jacking off to your writing instead of watching seancody or belami. this chapter is just pure masterpiece

oh, I read my story over again, even i was confused about the time. i am sorry about the inconsistency. let me think think how to amend it. Jake definitely cares about his brother and he will play a very important role in the following few chapters. Otto will be of great help to them. Even the house is not otto's, Axel and Xav can at least sleep on the floor in otto's room right? Characters: Andy and Stephen Williams. They are brothers and they saved A&X in the forest when A&X stuck on the maple tree. Stephen was the father of the twins (nick and jordan) who were Xav's good friends.The Williams' place is only a 15 min walk from Xav's. Thanks for your continuous support and comment, cannd. Your support gives me the reason to write on. It really touches my heart to see long comments like this. Comment like this is the greatest reward for writing the story to me. Lots of love, JC

Otto's place (which is the Williams' place) is less than 15 minutes from Xav's house. I have already deleted the in 'the Pearl Harbour' and decapitalized second world war. Thanks for pointing the mistakes out. Well, many historians believe that the attack marked the turning point of WWII as before the attack, the central power was winning, but after the attack, the US joined WWII and the central power began its road to defeat. that's what i meant by turning point. Thanks for your continuous support for the story, Lisa. You never fail to make my day. Lots of love, JC

at nearly 20, I am still a virgin. except for masturbation, my sex/love life is as blank as a paper. so i really have no idea how to write the preparation stuff. i wish i knew how to write it:(

11:56 p.m. I heard the door swing open. No sooner had the door opened than candlelight flooded in and shattered the complete darkness in the room. A gasp of shock followed. My blood ran cold, colder than the poles. Trembling with fear, I instantly halted the fabulous ride on Axel’s long fat cock, but his magic wand was still deep inside of me. Axel, who was facing the door, uttered something in German. Looking into his eyes, I sensed fear. I didn’t dare to turn around to see who had trespass

this chapter is so scarily hot!!! thanks to you kc, my boxer shorts are soaked with pre-cum. and i wonder how many boners and wet pussies are there after reading this chap. a really fabulous chapter, hottest love-making description i hv ever read. Michael and Asher are...just btw, alert the readers to take off the boxer shorts if the next chapter is as sizzlingly hot as this one

What make you think I'll ruin their relationship? >< you'll know what is going to happen to them very soon. you know, life can never be as perfect as we imagined, bad things are bound to happen. But at the time, a bad thing can be a blessing in disguise. Anyway, thanks for leaving me your thought, I really appreciate it. =) Lots of love, JC

I had no idea why this chapter was not shown on the update list… Anyway, glad that you saw it. I promise Axel and Xavier's romance will bloom and grow in the following chapters. There is a Chinese saying that is roughly translated as ‘A true friend is known in the day of adversity.’ Something bad is about to surface and I believe it would be a good test to their relationship. Well, before they had sex, Xavier HAD locked the door. But you know, there is something called key in the world. LOL. Whether the unwelcome intruder is mum or Jake, or someone else, stay tuned. New update will be posted within a week hopefully =3 Lots of love, JC

oh... I'm sorry for the cliffhanger, but I'm not so sure how the story should go on, that's why... I really need to have a detailed plan for the following chapters. anyway, i'm glad that you think the story is good. next chapter will be updated within a week hopefully. Lots of loveeeeeeeeeeee

I have as well been wondering how to portray Axel... As this story is a first-person narrative, I found it quite hard to portray Axel's personality. In the upcoming, I will attempt to show more of Axel's stories before he arrived Canada. and the reason why Axel was the one in control in the barn was that - this is my ULTIMATE sexual fantasy. I want someone like Axel to love me like that [cough cough] Xav will repay Axel sooner or later, no worry. XD

I am so glad that you found the story hot. making the readers horny is the purpose of this chapter lol.I didn't say that Axel was deep throating Xav like a pro... Maybe my phrasing should emphasize more on the fact that Axel was attempting to do that... my fault... I've never deep throated anybody or been deep throated... so i really have no idea how difficult it is... lol

Thank you for your patient wait, Andy. I hope it would be worth the wait. Comments or just a few words (or even just a like) from readers never fail to make my day. I am very glad that you like the story and i'm sure you have no idea how your words mean to me. Thanks a lot for your support =3 Lots of love JC

I love readers who are always being critical of my work. I am a tyro in story-telling, so your critiques are of the utmost importance to my road to a more professional writer. Don’t hesitate to critique my work, I love to know how the readers feel and think. I know there are a lot of rooms for improvement in my work, and only through hearing from you guys could I really learn how to improve my work. Negative comments are as highly appreciated as positive comments. Whether A & X would be found out, stay tuned for the upcoming chapters. I hope it won't break your heart (?)

I tried to do some research on the legality of homosexuality in Northern Canada during the war period. I couldn’t find any websites that clearly indicated its status. Most webpages say the issue was always shunned at that time, but there seemed to me no specific laws that made it illegal or punishable. Even it was punishable, I believe it would be ignored during 1940s. As most men were mobilized to fight in the war, I don’t think there would be any people to ‘judge’ whether it is wrong or not. People were all preoccupied with food production, so things like homosexuality should be of second or even lower priority. Anyway, thanks for pointing this out and supporting this story all along. =3

As Axel’s English progressed, our relationship began to get more psychological. It had been 7 months since Axel first learnt English, and he could now handle long and complicated conversations. At night, as we lay in bed side by side, we would sometimes chat about everything and nothing. He started to share a part of him with me and he would tell me stories about his childhood from time to time. One of his stories that I remembered the most was that: When Axel was fifteen, girls in his class we

Work in the morning; tender kissing and cuddling at night – Life couldn’t get any better. Having Axel by my side all the time made my life gloriously complete. In our first month, we just pleasured each other with our hands without taking our relationship onto another level. Of course, stroking each other’s dick alone could not satiate our thirst for one another. Yet, I wanted to take it slow; I didn’t want to rush everything – you know, save the best thing for last. Each night, to play safe, w

stay awake - ellie goulding touch me - katharine mcphee

I didn't know I typed dinning... lol didn't spot that while proofreading. I am glad that you like the chapter =) Some unexpectedness is coming!!! hehehehe >v< will I be forgiven if i skip updating this week? coz I have an essay to finish up........=(

My bed, which was a single bed, felt so pleasantly minuscule on that night. Though I could hardly fall asleep with Axel beside me, it felt splendidly wonderful to be feeling Axel’s warm skins. I spent nearly the whole night marveling at Axel’s breathtaking sleeping face and enjoying his heavenly body warmth. Not long after our sensual experience, Axel soon conked out. I didn’t want to sleep, for I was so fearful that when I wake up in the morning, I would find that everything was just my imagina

I am so glad that you like both of the characters. It hurts me to see some readers dislike Xavier so much because Xavier is my mirror. LOL Thank you so much for reading the story and leaving me a comment. I am very grateful for that, and reading your review really cheers me up in these dog days. I will definitely write on and the next chapter will be out, hopefully, on the coming Saturday/Sunday. Stay tuned.Uncountable amount of love, JC

I am so glad that you like both of the characters. It hurts me to see some readers dislike Xavier so much because Xavier is my mirror. LOL Thank you so much for reading the story and leaving me a comment. I am very grateful for that, and reading your review really cheers me up in these dog days. I will definitely write on and the next chapter will be out, hopefully, on the coming Saturday/Sunday. Stay tuned.Uncountable amount of love, JC

Oh, Michael. He's too perfect to be true. His confession to Ash really melted my heart. It's so romantic and sincere. 'but I can’t imagine my life without you in it.' Woah! How I wish someone would say that to me. Hell, where can I find someone like Michael?!?!?!? I love the jerking scene as well, it's so hot and stimulating. I can really feel the hear and passion. The use of vocabulary is very nice, it makes everything so vivid. I look forward to the upcoming trial with the biased judge and the 'invincible' defense attorney. Good job KC:3 JC

Oh... Seems like everyone dislikes Xavier. Oh my god, Xavier is a reflection of myself. LOL. The story actually reveals my attitude towards love. Well, after so many negative feeling towards Xavier, seems like I have to change LOL~~~ the reason why I wrote Axel to be the one to confess was because I want someone like Axel to confess to me. LOLAnyways, thanks again for supporting my story from the beginning to the present. It really means the WHOLE world to me. U have no effing idea how much your comments can make me feel. I am very very grateful for your support and comments so far; and I hope you will continue to support this story. You are the reason why I wrote :3 Well, the story is NOT going to end soon. There will be quite a lot to come. There will be some unexpectedness in the forthcoming chapters. I guess the final chapter will be chapter twenty something. (Actually I need your advice, i'll send you a PM later) I actually got a very interesting new storyline running in my head. So after this PoW, I will start a new story. Once again, thank you KC. Tons of love, JC

I hope Xavier is not too unlikeable coz Xavier is a reflection of my myself, LOL. Jkjk. But yea, in a relationship, I am the passive one, I want people to confess first LOL.And... Updating the story once a week is really the maximum for me. I am actually a very slow writer, it really takes me at least one whole day to write a chapter, sometimes even two. I am now doing a summer course, I don't have enough time to write faster. I am sorry for that... But Lisa, I just want you to know that your comments never fails to make my day. I would have given up writing this story if you had not been so supportive of the story. I am really glad that you like the story. Please wait for the next chapter, it will be out on Saturday/Sunday. Tons of love, JC

A Week After Axel’s Birthday After Axel’s birthday, there seemed to be a colossal wall between Axel and I. Whenever I saw him, I would put on an aloof expression, hoping that he would not approach me. Lover or nothing, I didn't want to be his friend. I kept pretending that I didn’t care about him even though it stung like a bee sting. Feeling uneasy with my stolidity, Axel became more and more attached to Jake, which, to be very honest, made me jealous to death. The two of them were always toge