murakisdoll

Holy cowwww. Such a long and awesome chapter with yet another plot twister. Cant wait for the next chapter!!

ahhh I am still eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Hope to see it soon *wink* *wink* *wink*

"Being in love is the most fucking awesome thing in existence." this chapter made me so damned happy inside lol. It did make me wonder where Mira learned...all his techniques though hehe.

lol I totally had my suspicions man. Ah this chapter made my day pheww

ahhh...so it happened. I knew someone was going to die...but Mira? T^T I had to literally pause my reading for a little bit lol. But like Shay, I shall await for what happens in the next chapter and hope to see some resolve. Please update sooooonnnn.

got a notification from Hidden Sunlight today...turns out it was only an edit T^T. *is anxiously awaiting the next chapter*

I can't even explain in words how much I am loving this story (even though i can't say the same thing for the cliffhanger at the end of this chapter lol). I absolutely love it when i read the interactions between shay and Mira. Their innocence is like a breathe of fresh air from all the other things I've read here. After every end of a chapter, I am always left craving for more. please update soon! =]

oh man. I love being in Mira's head. Interesting place. On a side note, it's really surprising me how violent Shay can become. Don't get me wrong. I was screaming "kill that son of a bitch" during that manipulative scene, but it just really surprised me that Shay had it in him.

oh mah lord such a long and wonderful chapter! Once again I am reduced to a puddle of good everytime Shay talks about his relationship with Mira. It's just so pure and innocent that its like a breathe of fresh air to me. keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the next chapter!

veryyyy nice chapter =]. I like that we were able to see into Mira's head a little bit this time. Who was that sharpling at the end I wonder. I'm also glad that Shay has finally accepted his feelings for Mira too ^^. I do wonder how their relationship will develop further when communication is still a bit lacking. I'm sure they'll make by somehow! Hope to see an update to this wonderful story soon!

That kiss was so damned sweet. usually when i read a story, a kiss would just something that was happening on the side and could be easily skipped over when im reading, but this definitely kept my attention. As for the romantic sex question, because i do prefer it to be more...physically explained, i don't think that it will take away anything from this awesome story. Personally, I think that this story can get a little serious and intense sometimes. A good sex scene should spice things up a bit =D

I have my pitchfork and fire torch. When do we set out on our bitch hunt? =D great chapterrrr =D...I went and finished 5 seasons of Ghost Whisperer because of this...O.O

Oh, I am most definitely curious as to how their relationship will develop. A kid and his ghost friend huh? interesting indeed!

This chapter was great! I'm glad that Christian has come to terms with his feelings for David...all thats left is awesome mind blowing sex...but taking it slow is good too lol.