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JoeInMV

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  1. This has been a great ride. I'm of two minds about coming to the end. I really want to see Bridget get what she deserves, but I will miss not having more of this story to read. I hope that C. James will continue to write, perhaps a sequel, or something independent from this story. I know that I will reread this story in a few months.
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    Commands from Afar

    As Shane would say, this chapter was ripper. I hope Bridget has made a major mistake by going to New Zealand. I think it's stupid that Trev and Shane haven't told Greg or Rachel about the tape.
  3. Just a quick note to tell you that I'm enjoying your story. I came across it rather late in the game. I've been reading a couple chapters at a time while I'm on a treadmill at the gym. You've kept me on the edge of my seat for a lot of those chapters. I can't believe that Joel and Lisa were so stupid as to go looking for Bridget Bellevue. I think maybe you made them a bit too impulsive, but it does setup the story for more to happen. I'm looking to seeing how it all ends. I hope Bridget gets what's coming to her. -- Joe
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