JoeInMV

I would love to see this story completed. I'd buy it. The last posted chapter ended in a cliff hanger.

I'm curious as to why the chapter appears twice in this posting? Otherwise, a good chapter.

First, thanks for the long chapter. I think I've read books shorter than this chapter. Well worth the wait we went through. I hope chapter 32 won't be quite so long in coming. I've read a lot of sword and sorcery novels, and this is as good or better than any of them.

Glad to see that you're back. I was worried about you. This was a good chapter. Sets up things nicely for what's to come.

Good chapter Mark. Glad to see that you are still with us.

Some heavy stuff, especially JJ, but a great chapter.

I can't figure out how to edit a review. The word "should" was meant to be "showed" but auto-correct got in the way somehow.

Great chapter. I thought Will should a lot of maturity in supporting Zach. I personally feel that the two boys are more mature than Zach's father Wally.

Love the ruse Zach pulled to get Assistant Coach Alabach fired. I think he's learning from the Schluters. It's sad to see such a poor relationship between parents and their son. What the hell is wrong with his father? He's got a son that's easily going to be a football star.

I'm glad that Will hasn't completely lost Zack. I wish I'd had someone like JP to talk to when I was Will's age.

Good chapter. I feel so sorry for Will. We may finally see a change in the NFL when Michael Sam is drafted, and I do believe some team will pick him up. He's too good a player not to be given a chance. There may be some initial conflict with team mates, but if he performs, that will go away. Winning is everything in the NFL.

This whole series of stories have been outstanding. Thank you Mark for your and your team's efforts in bringing these stories to us. One positive thing that came despite the sorrow and lot is that the rift between Brad and Will seems to be greatly reduced. I can't wait to see where you take this in the next book, hopefully, there will be a next book.

Wow, what a great chapter. This one actually had me in tears.

I just read the epilogue. Good ending to a great story. Within a year or less, I'l reread it. There's always something I miss on a first reading, probably due to my ADD, that I usually find stuff on a second reading. Once again, Great job!

I'm nearly speechless. I am glad that Stef, Brad, Will, Maddy, and Darius made it out. I wish Robby hadn't felt that he had to go save Jeanine and Hank, but he is a true hero. I blame Hank's stubbornness for what happened to the three of them. If she'd given in and left with the others, they'd have all made it out. Awesome chapters dealing with the events of that horrible day. Living in California, it was surreal when I turned on the TV and saw what was happening. At first, I thought it was some sort of teleplay, but when I changed channels and saw it on everyone, I knew it was real. I didn't know anyone that was in the towers, but these chapters have made it seem as if I do now.