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I would love to see this story completed. I'd buy it. The last posted chapter ended in a cliff hanger.
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I'm curious as to why the chapter appears twice in this posting? Otherwise, a good chapter.
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First, thanks for the long chapter. I think I've read books shorter than this chapter. Well worth the wait we went through. I hope chapter 32 won't be quite so long in coming. I've read a lot of sword and sorcery novels, and this is as good or better than any of them.
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Glad to see that you're back. I was worried about you. This was a good chapter. Sets up things nicely for what's to come.
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Good chapter Mark. Glad to see that you are still with us.
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Some heavy stuff, especially JJ, but a great chapter.
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I can't figure out how to edit a review. The word "should" was meant to be "showed" but auto-correct got in the way somehow.
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Great chapter. I thought Will should a lot of maturity in supporting Zach. I personally feel that the two boys are more mature than Zach's father Wally.
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Love the ruse Zach pulled to get Assistant Coach Alabach fired. I think he's learning from the Schluters. It's sad to see such a poor relationship between parents and their son. What the hell is wrong with his father? He's got a son that's easily going to be a football star.
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I'm glad that Will hasn't completely lost Zack. I wish I'd had someone like JP to talk to when I was Will's age.
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Good chapter. I feel so sorry for Will. We may finally see a change in the NFL when Michael Sam is drafted, and I do believe some team will pick him up. He's too good a player not to be given a chance. There may be some initial conflict with team mates, but if he performs, that will go away. Winning is everything in the NFL.
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This whole series of stories have been outstanding. Thank you Mark for your and your team's efforts in bringing these stories to us. One positive thing that came despite the sorrow and lot is that the rift between Brad and Will seems to be greatly reduced. I can't wait to see where you take this in the next book, hopefully, there will be a next book.
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Wow, what a great chapter. This one actually had me in tears.
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I just read the epilogue. Good ending to a great story. Within a year or less, I'l reread it. There's always something I miss on a first reading, probably due to my ADD, that I usually find stuff on a second reading. Once again, Great job!
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Chapter 38: Survivors and Victims
JoeInMV commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 38: Survivors and Victims
I'm nearly speechless. I am glad that Stef, Brad, Will, Maddy, and Darius made it out. I wish Robby hadn't felt that he had to go save Jeanine and Hank, but he is a true hero. I blame Hank's stubbornness for what happened to the three of them. If she'd given in and left with the others, they'd have all made it out. Awesome chapters dealing with the events of that horrible day. Living in California, it was surreal when I turned on the TV and saw what was happening. At first, I thought it was some sort of teleplay, but when I changed channels and saw it on everyone, I knew it was real. I didn't know anyone that was in the towers, but these chapters have made it seem as if I do now. -
Over a year since this chapter was published. I'd love to see another chapter. This story has become one of my all-time favorites.
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Circumnavigation (99+56) The Belly of the Beast
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Bridget got what she deserved. I hope it doesn't end up being a pyrrhic victory for our heroes. I'm hoping that Frank is able to come up with something to help. -
First, glad the story is back. For a long time, I've thought that Will is trying to grow up a bit too quickly, but I hope this incident makes him more aware of what his choices can bring about.
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If if quacks like a cliffhanger, it probably is a cliffhanger.
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Circumnavigation (99+54) Final Rendezvous
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Wow, it just keeps getting worse for our heroes. Lisa and Joel might be able to escape if they could find their way to the American Embassy, but I don't see a way out for Trevor and Shane. -
Circumnavigation (99+50) Countdown to Doomsday
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
What scares me is the possibility that this story does not have a happy ending. Bridget just seems too prepared on this one. This story has been a great ride and I will be sad when it ends, however it ends. -
Circumnavigation (99+52) 'Till Death do them Part
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Why do I get the feeling that the new location is not as unprotected as it appears? This was a good chapter, a lot going on and the suspense is high. I can't wait for the next chapter. -
Circumnavigation (99+49) False Hopes and the End of the World
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
I'm wondering how they're going to get out of this one. Hopefully changing the satellite phone will keep Bridget from directly tracking them. The tough part is that Bridget has her Argentine contacts. The really must elude the patrol boat or an Orion aircraft, but I don't see how they can pull that off. Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter and can barely wait for the next one. -
Circumnavigation (99+48) Echos of War
JoeInMV replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
Trevor is a bit of a scatter brain, I think. I guess the potatoes are to see if there's actually anyone on duty on the patrol boat. I'm not sure what would be gained in alerting the crew. -
Wow! I hardly know where to start. First, a great chapter. I was sorry to reach the end of it. I hope someone realizes how dangerous it is for Trevor and Shane to go through the Panama Canal and figures out an alternative.
