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Jaro You are a man of your word. I loved it when I went into the site and saw all your comments. This story began because of my feeling for another boy I had when I was in the 7th or 8th grade. He was the substitute on my paper route. He moved away. I was very disappointed.
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Things are lying heavily on Matt's mind. My dad always said, "You never get anything for nothing." Matt may have $9200 hidden in the garage, but it comes with a lot of problems. The party should be fun, well for most everyone but a few of those who attend.
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Knots 4 Chapter 4 Matt Our lunch table was filled with tension and worry on Friday. I had the football game and that was on my mind as well as Saturday’s party at the pool. Shit, who knew what was going to happen. I decided there’d be no pot or drinking for me because I was sure I’d make a fool of myself, and that was the last thing I needed. I’d never drank or smoked, and I figured I’d probably choke to death if I smoked pot. Gina and Emily were worried it wa
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Knots 4 Chapter 3 Matt I got a kick out of Thomas when he talked about Colt. It seemed like being experienced had its drawbacks. Thomas sounded patient though. You could do that when you really cared for someone. I’d been observing them on campus and Colt looked so unsure of himself. Thomas was shy, but in this situation, he felt both confident and unsure of himself at the same time. They sat by each other at the GSA meetings and sometimes hold hands. Personally, I’m no
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You're right Lisa. Randy could be beaten too. I'm seeing Matt's suffering being internal. You notice that everyone thinks Matt would never do anything like that. They have their doubts about Andy. The question is, will everyone find out? It's a hard secret to keep.
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StorReder, thanks for your comments. I'm going to stick with it until they are in the present so there should be a Knots 5 and 6 at least. I have a new story in mind, but an afraid to start it because I don't want the weekly updates of Knots to suffer. Thanks for your support. Elias
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Knots 4 Chapter 2 Andy Randy finally came to the hospital a couple days before I got out. We had a long heart-to-heart talk. The nurse was tampering with my tubes and catheter when he sauntered into my room like he didn’t have a care in the world. I turned to the nurse. “Would you mind? We’d like to have some privacy.” She knew my story and had heard the rumors because we’d talked some, so she gave me a knowing look that seemed to indicate she hat
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Lisa, as always, I love your reviews. I just wish more people would write a review. There seems to be a loyal following, but not many readers write a review. You are right. Who knows what's going to happen if and when Andy's parents find out or for that matter if anyone finds out about Matt. Even Thomas thought Matt would never prostitute himself. Well, there are always consequences to the knots we tie in our lives. Thanks again Lisa. You're the greatest.
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Knots 4 Chapter 1 Andy I’ve never been able to figure out why I’m lucky enough to have a best friend like Matt. It often seemed like I didn’t deserve him. In many ways, I thought I had corrupted him. We’d been through so much together, starting with being friends in elementary school, a time when we were so innocent and knew nothing of sex or of what kind of control it would have over our lives. There was the time when we mowed lawns together and the day Emily and Gina cam
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This is the fourth in the series of stories called Knots. It's the story of Matt and Andy, who were fourteen when Knots was first published and are now sixteen and juniors in high school. This is the continuing story of the relationship between Matt and Andy and the knots they tie that change the course of their lives.
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Lisa is my editor and I see she's made a comment and likes your chapter. These guys are really having a good time. It always helps when people have money and they're given a head start. What a great summer on the island. I'm wondering where the story is headed right now. There is a lot of fun and play. We need some heartbreak or a serious crisis. They may be in future chapters and I don't know it since I haven't read that far.
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I'm very impressed with the continued improvement in your writing in each chapter. It shows more confidence and a real knack for telling a good story. I have a good image of what is happening and of the characters. Keep up the good work.
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Boy, these guys really have it nice. The cottage has a workout room and sauna. What fun to have a jet ski. I noticed that you are using more dialogue to carry the story. You can learn a lot about characters through dialogue and you're doing a great job. I have a good idea of what Asher looks like and of course we have some idea where this is all going. Well, at least I think so.
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I'd sure like to know your secret to getting so many reviews. That's quite a complement to you as a writer. Let me know your secret via email. Thanks
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How great it is to get a camera. I can remember when I got my first camera. I now own four of them, plus my phone and I hardly ever take a picture. It's sad. This chapter moved quite well with great dialogue. It slowed some toward the end.
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Great opening. Makes me want to read more. It sounds so much like a teenager.
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One thing I learned a while back is that people do the damnest things and sometimes there's no explaining why they do it. The thing is, Matt would like to have sex with Andy, but he doesn't at the same time. It's this confusion that causes him the most trouble. So he stays at Andy's because he wants to be with him.
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Faxity, a lot of readers don't like cliffhangers, but I think they're the best way to get readers to come back to find out what's going to happen next.
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I can't remember what chapter the 12 step seduction takes place, but you must be close.
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These boys are 14 and very unsure of themselves. I think that is true of most 14 year olds. Some act like they have it all together, but I think in most cases it's all show.
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Faxity, thanks for letting me know about the repeat. You're the first one to mention it. I'll check it out.
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Andy's self-esteem is kind of a false one. That's Andy's problem, but it takes some time for the reader to find tht out.
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Chapter 4 - Matt - Andy - Gina - Emily
Uplifted Spirit commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Matt - Andy - Gina - Emily
Faxity, you are sharp. I used that scene in the last chapter of Knots 3 which I just completed. Andy is always in a hurry and doesn't want to take his time or examine things closely or figure the outcomes before acting. -
Chapter 3 - Andy -- Matt
Uplifted Spirit commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Andy -- Matt
Glad you're enjoying the story and are reading right through it to the end. -
Faxity, you're on the right track, but you'll find that it is Andy who actually lacks confidence. Matt has his doubts but Andy bringing the kids to the pool was all about his desire to be liked.
