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Knots Chapter 8 Matt I tried to talk my parents into not letting me go to school, but all they said was, “You made your bed, now lie in it.” At first I was pissed until I realized they were right. Andy and I met to catch the bus and there was utter silence at the bus stop. Kids looked at us and it seemed like they didn’t know what to do or say. They probably had images of the four of us sucking and fucking. Hard to tell. A few gave us smiles. Even
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Andy is maturing little by little, but he has a ways to go.
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Things are rough for Matt. You're right. These scenes were hard to right because each boy finds himself in a different position. Matt hasn't told anyone he's have sex with guys and Andy already said he was gay. It ends up being easier on him except at school where he's told no one but his close friend.
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Lisa, I call myself uplifted spirit because while I know terrible things happen in life, sometimes it's important to have people who love us and carry us over the rough spots. I thought it a good idea of have parents who had concerns, but were supportive. Thanks for your comments.
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Knots Chapter 7 Matt The ride home was quiet. None of us knew what to say until my mom turned to me in the backseat. “Matt, we had no idea. Why didn’t you tell us?” I didn’t respond at first. “I couldn’t. I hoped you’d never find out. I should have known better.” My dad looked in the rearview mirror. “We’ve always trusted you to tell us the truth, to talk to us about things. What happened? One day we think we know everything about you and the
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I'm growing to really like Thomas too. He started out as a minor character and appears to becoming more important.
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Knots of course.
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Wheeler is pretty sharp. He always surprises me. You're right, it's good for Matt in the long run that things are out.
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Knots Chapter 6 Andy Wheeler sat down and I started to leave the witness stand when Banta said, “I have a few more questions for this witness.” I looked at the judge and he nodded for me to return to the witness chair. I’d hoped we were going to take a break. Wheeler had managed to pull their cocks out of my ass, but that asshole Banta was up with his yellow legal pad to see if he could put it back in and fuck me hard and deep. “I know this has to be hard for y
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The defense is going to call Matt back to the stand and see if they can discredit him.
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Astro I never like to make things happen the way people might expect. It was a powerful scene when Andy testified that Matt and given his virginity to him to keep him from killing himself. List may be right. How can the defense argue against that. But the defense is going to fight back by recalling Matt. Who knows what will happen then. Thanks for writing and being a good follower.
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Lisa You're so right about the parents. It's going to be fun writing about that. Then of course there are all the friends at school who had no idea what was going on with these guys. I picture a few closet cases hitting on them when they get back to school while others will want to kick there asses, especially since they had a foursome. There is so much that can happen. Thomas is a lovable character. He and Randy had been good friends since they were very young and of course Randy wasn't the way he is now before Dillon. His bitterness is coming out. The court scenes have been very enjoyable to write. Thanks for the nice comment about it being like watching an episode of Law and Order SVU
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StoriReder, this is one of the best comments I've gotten on my story. Your comments mean a lot to me. Thanks for taking the time to post a comment.
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Knots 3 Chapter 5 Matt Maybe it was just me, but the news, while objective, made it look like Andy liked having sex with Dillon. Which of course he did. The defense kept pointing out that Andy never objected to having sex with Dillon. He finally had to admit it was consensual. My parents and I discussed it after the news. I expressed my concerns, but my dad, ever the optimist, said, “Dillon still had sex with minors. That’s the case. He raped you. That’s t
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Astro, thanks for the comment. The next chapter was hard to write for two reasons. First, I added a little sex and I always worry that it will distract readers from the story line, but hopefully I made it work. Second, I had to decide how the defense was going to bring out facts that Andy and the boys didn't want to talk about. Then I had to decide how DA Wheeler would counter. Let me know if you think the ending works.
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Paul, good question. Randy is the one everyone is worried about, but could it end up being Andy?
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Lisa, you are right about Wheeler. I'm afraid that the last part of the next chapter brought tears to my eyes. I hope they do the same for our readers.
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Knots 3 Chapter 4 Andy Thank God the judge suggested we take a fifteen minute break. My parents and I sat in the hall with Matt’s parents. “I think the DA made the case against Dillon luring you into having sex with him,” my dad said. Matt’s parents nodded. Their faces showed concern and fear. I smiled. “I’m ready for the defense. Remember, it was Dillon who went after me and not the other way around.” Everyone looked re
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Strange, I couldn't wait for the defense to get to Andy too. The trial has really been fun to write.
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Astro Probably impossible for them not to be exposed. Dillon's defense team is tough.
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Lisa I'm glad you curiosity was peaked.
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Astro, thanks for writing. I appreciate your comments. You are right about Randy. He's been affected by Dillon. He reflects more than the others the damage Dillon did to all of them. This is why he strikes out as he does. I'm not sure if this comes through in the writing or not, but I hope so.
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Knots 3 Chapter 3 Andy Matt, Thomas, Randy, and I met with DA Wheeler and our parents in Wheeler’s office after court. “I think things went pretty well,” Wheeler said. “I’m calling Andy to the stand tomorrow.” He glanced at Matt’s parents. “There are some things that might come out that you are unaware of.” Matt’s parents looked at him. Matt dropped his eyes. “Is there anything you want to tell us?” Matt’s dad asked. He shook his head
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As usual, you are right on. Banta is doing his job and you're right, it could look bad for the boys if they come off as just looking like horny teenagers. On the other hand, while teenagers are normally horny, Dillon is responsible for pressing their buttons.
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Knots 3 Chapter 2 Matt I hate to say it, but I felt like I was using Thomas. I was horny and he’s so hot, I couldn’t help myself. It was almost as if I was becoming like Andy. Thomas is a great guy. He’s considerate, kind, and loving, but to tell you the truth I’m beginning to think I don’t have any romance in my soul. Yeah, I love Andy. But I’m not in love with him. I like sex with Andy and Thomas, but it’s not love; it’s sex. Gina and I are close and I tried once to get her to g
