Uplifted Spirit
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One thing I learned a while back is that people do the damnest things and sometimes there's no explaining why they do it. The thing is, Matt would like to have sex with Andy, but he doesn't at the same time. It's this confusion that causes him the most trouble. So he stays at Andy's because he wants to be with him.
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Faxity, a lot of readers don't like cliffhangers, but I think they're the best way to get readers to come back to find out what's going to happen next.
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I can't remember what chapter the 12 step seduction takes place, but you must be close.
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These boys are 14 and very unsure of themselves. I think that is true of most 14 year olds. Some act like they have it all together, but I think in most cases it's all show.
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Faxity, thanks for letting me know about the repeat. You're the first one to mention it. I'll check it out.
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Andy's self-esteem is kind of a false one. That's Andy's problem, but it takes some time for the reader to find tht out.
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Chapter 4 - Matt - Andy - Gina - Emily
Uplifted Spirit commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Matt - Andy - Gina - Emily
Faxity, you are sharp. I used that scene in the last chapter of Knots 3 which I just completed. Andy is always in a hurry and doesn't want to take his time or examine things closely or figure the outcomes before acting. -
Chapter 3 - Andy -- Matt
Uplifted Spirit commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Andy -- Matt
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Faxity, you're on the right track, but you'll find that it is Andy who actually lacks confidence. Matt has his doubts but Andy bringing the kids to the pool was all about his desire to be liked.
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Faxity, thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments and am sure you'll find a lot of surprises as you go through the story.
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Faxity, thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments and am sure you'll find a lot of surprises as you go through the story.
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Lisa, this was a sad chapter. And sometimes it's hard to believe what these two get into. Glad you liked the chapter.
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Derrick is a much nicer guy than most pimps. But then he's just starting out. Andy is nuts for wanting to go out 1 on 1, but he wants the money. I think all Randy wants is a chance to get in on the deal.
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I hope you find everything as it should be. Thanks for the review.
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Yes, such a long way to fall.
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Knots 3 Chapter 28 Matt We had sex with the four menu items and about eight other guys over the next six weeks. Sometimes we worked in the middle of the week and a few evenings. A couple of times Derrick drove us to Rockbury, the same town where Dillon and Andy used to go, but we stayed at a fancy hotel for the evening instead of the Oxford Suites. Derrick was always there until one time when we showed up at his apartment and found a note on the door saying he’d be late, th
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Knots 3 Chapter 27 Andy Matt was a little concerned, but the idea of another five hundred bucks each in our pockets was enough to take care of any doubts he had. We went out on a date at the Outback that Friday. We couldn’t resist the opportunity to actually go out on a date and be able to afford the most expensive meal on the menu. We asked to be seated at a table in a quiet corner where we could have some privacy. Derrick showed up almost as quickly as we wer
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Knots 3 Chapter 26 Andy What a day! Matt and I made $500 each. But hell, the day was only half over because we still had work ahead of us. Matt and I headed into the shower and came out naked. When we returned, Jack, Chet, Alex, and Deshaun were laying on the bed with their cocks in their hands. Jack took the lead. “Chet and I will take Andy. Alex and Deshaun, you have Matt.” Damn, it was obvious the tables had turned. Matt and I were the menu items. Jack
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Knots 3 Chapter 25 Matt You are probably all wondering what the hell ever happened to the Matt you used to know. Hell, I don’t know what happened to the Matt you used to know. I had no idea what changes would happen in my life and what knots I’d tie the night I gave up my virginity to Andy. This question keeps going through my mind now: Would you do it again if you knew that you were going to sink so low as to prostitute yourself to four men? Twenty-four years old or not,
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I have to tell you StoriReder that it is hard thinking of new things to happen in these boy's life. I'm not sure I like the route the two of them are taking, but after all this gook is called Knots and these two main characters do tie knots. I'm going to do my best to take them through their senior years with a wrap up after they graduate. Only problem is, I'm not sure what will happen between now and then. I'm sure something will come to mind. Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
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The are ignorant homophobic idiots aren't they. There are a lot of them out there. Art imitates life, right? Thanks for your comments Lisa
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StoriReder Thanks for following and I'm glad you're having a great time. This week's chapter is the beginning of some crazy things.
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Knots 3 Chapter 24 Andy Yep, there was the green Toyota Tacoma following slowly behind us. We stopped and waited for them to pull alongside us. Jack rolled down the window. “Do you two hot studs need a ride?” “Nah, we’re fine,” I said. Jack opened the door, stepped out, and opened the backdoor of the extended cab. “Come on, get in.” I glanced at Matt, and he shook his head. “No. We’ll walk.” Jack closed the backdoor and
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Knots 3 Chapter 23 Andy I couldn’t believe it. Matt and I were going to meet up with Derrick this Saturday, which couldn’t come soon enough as far as I was concerned. I managed to get my parents’ car and we got there about a quarter to two. We decided to get there early so we could surprise him and see if he was up to no good. Yeah, we were both a little scared. We hesitated before we knocked on his door. Derrick yelled, “Be right there.”
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Knots 3 Chapter 22 Andy I don’t know how I could forget to write about Matt and me at the pond; it must have been because the GSA club was on my mind. Matt and I had awesome sex out at the pond before I came home and began my research on the GSA. He was like an aggressive animal. It’s usually me who is the more aggressive one. He and I fucked in the pond for the first time. Matt wanted to try something new and I’m always game for anything. I gave him a hard time about no
