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** As we were leaving, my mom whispered into my ear. "You certainly have yourself a looker, and he seems very nice. They didn't make boys like that when I was your age. I trust you to be careful, but I expect you to have the time of your life." She kissed me on the cheek, and we left for San Francisco. ** Something strange happened on our way back to the city. I was sitting between Oscar and Jakob in the second row of the SUV. I couldn’t be happier. Frank and Emma sat i
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Thanks for the comment. There will be more revelations in upcoming chapters.
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I think you’re right, but they are both teenagers and it’s hard to predict what will happen. There are the hormones though.
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There’s definitely gamesmanship at play. But to what end?
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You’re always thinking. I can neither confirm nor deny…. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. There are a few surprises in upcoming chapters (I hope).
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Glad you’re picking up on some of the subplots. Thanks for the comment.
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** "They just broke the high school record, and that's after already running two miles!" said Coach Krebs. "Hell, the men's world record is forty-three seconds. I wouldn't be surprised if they threatened that time if they were fresh. Look at them. They aren't even winded. They're astonishing." Coach Krebs was so excited I was afraid he'd pee his pants. We watched the four boys run toward Lake Merced to log more miles. I thought, 'Who are these guys!' ** Friday, in the seco
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I’m glad someone noticed. It’s easier to write about something I know.
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Matt wants to find out if the stamina translates to the bedroom. Thanks for the comment.
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Lol, not were I was going, but might make a great alternative ending!
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The Norwegians are mystery. I suspected we’ll learn their story soon. Thank for the comment.
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** I felt fantastic. What an amazing day. It had a bit of everything: successfully performing my duties as a school ambassador, meeting Oscar and the other Norwegians, seeing a fun popcorn movie, getting mugged and living to tell the tale, and experiencing my first sauna and cold plunge. My life is almost perfect - almost. ** It was the longest weekend of my life. Monday couldn't arrive soon enough. Even my mom noticed I was preoccupied with something. "What's the matter, hone
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We’ve all been there. 😉
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Interesting. I didn’t know that.
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You’re on to something. The Norwegians have a secret. Thanks for the comment.
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Thank you for the interest.
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We’ll learn more about these boys in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading.
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Thank for the comment. I think you’re right about the Norwegians. There’s something going on with them.
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** Brad, Amy, Emma, and I stared at the Norwegians in amazement. "How did you do that?" asked Brad. "We have some self-defense training," said Frank. After an awkward pause, Carson added. "That type of training is common in Norway." I wasn't sure about that. 'That's some training,' I thought. 'The guys that robbed us looked tough. John Wick would have trouble disarming them.’ Who are these guys? ** “The ‘N-line’ is scheduled to arrive in three minutes,” sa
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Thanks. We'll learn more about the new students in the next chapters.
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Matt hopes things work out too. Thanks for the comment.
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Thank you for commenting. You always provide insights.
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Thanks for the comment. There's more to come.
