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T The young often leap into supporting causes before understanding the repercussions of their actions. They might change their minds when they learn more.
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You may be right. “Eliminate” doesn’t always mean kill, but it might in this case. Thanks for the comment.
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Could be both a government agency and a secret organization. It may depend on how you define government. Thanks for commenting.
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There is more to learn about the Norwegians and the organization they are trying to escape. Thanks for commenting.
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Go to to have a twist now and then. Thanks for the comment. They are a tight group of friend may rise to the challenge. Thanks for the comment.
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** As we were leaving, my mom whispered into my ear. "You certainly have yourself a looker, and he seems very nice. They didn't make boys like that when I was your age. I trust you to be careful, but I expect you to have the time of your life." She kissed me on the cheek, and we left for San Francisco. ** Something strange happened on our way back to the city. I was sitting between Oscar and Jakob in the second row of the SUV. I couldn’t be happier. Frank and Emma sat i
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Thanks for the comment. There will be more revelations in upcoming chapters.
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I think you’re right, but they are both teenagers and it’s hard to predict what will happen. There are the hormones though.
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There’s definitely gamesmanship at play. But to what end?
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You’re always thinking. I can neither confirm nor deny…. Thanks for the comment.
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Thanks for the comment. There are a few surprises in upcoming chapters (I hope).
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Glad you’re picking up on some of the subplots. Thanks for the comment.
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** "They just broke the high school record, and that's after already running two miles!" said Coach Krebs. "Hell, the men's world record is forty-three seconds. I wouldn't be surprised if they threatened that time if they were fresh. Look at them. They aren't even winded. They're astonishing." Coach Krebs was so excited I was afraid he'd pee his pants. We watched the four boys run toward Lake Merced to log more miles. I thought, 'Who are these guys!' ** Friday, in the seco
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I’m glad someone noticed. It’s easier to write about something I know.
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Matt wants to find out if the stamina translates to the bedroom. Thanks for the comment.
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Lol, not were I was going, but might make a great alternative ending!
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The Norwegians are mystery. I suspected we’ll learn their story soon. Thank for the comment.
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** I felt fantastic. What an amazing day. It had a bit of everything: successfully performing my duties as a school ambassador, meeting Oscar and the other Norwegians, seeing a fun popcorn movie, getting mugged and living to tell the tale, and experiencing my first sauna and cold plunge. My life is almost perfect - almost. ** It was the longest weekend of my life. Monday couldn't arrive soon enough. Even my mom noticed I was preoccupied with something. "What's the matter, hone
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We’ve all been there. 😉
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Interesting. I didn’t know that.
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You’re on to something. The Norwegians have a secret. Thanks for the comment.
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Thank you for the interest.
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We’ll learn more about these boys in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading.
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Thank for the comment. I think you’re right about the Norwegians. There’s something going on with them.
