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    Chapter 1

    Mark Paren commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review. You definitely get it.
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    The Party Ethan arrived a little late to the end-of-school party. His best friend Kobe was already comfortably moving with the flow of the party. There must have been fifty to eighty kids present. There seemed to be more boys than girls, but that made sense because it was Kobe's party, and most guys and girls were not dating seriously yet. Ethan and Kobe casually exchanged their personal hand checks. Kobe's dad, a huge LA Lakers fan, named him after Kobe Bryant. It was funny, but the n
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    Chapter 1

    Mark Paren commented on Mark Paren's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review. You have picked up on some the the themes of the story. In the next chapter John will be introduced to Ethan. Both John and Ethan will need to work through a few things. Thanks again.
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    Preface "Once in every hundred years, they appear. Why they come and where they're from isn't clear, But they're here for our world." Howard Christman's Older (The Collectors, 1967) John is Born John Christman Anderson was conceived in the second decade of the 21st century. No one knew, but his conception occurred on a significant astronomical day. Three stars were perfectly aligned with a blue and a green planet in different galaxies. One of the stars was the Earth's su
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    Ten thousand years ago, the first permanent human settlements were established soon after an unusual astronomical occurrence. The same phenomenon occurred again fourteen years ago. This story explores the impact of the meeting between a talented fifteen-year-old and a strange and exceptional boy.
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    I am enjoying the story very much. The concept of waking up many years in the future opens up a lot fun and interesting areas to explore. Thanks for the entertaining prose.
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