Geemeedee
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I hope this isn't the end either, because it leaves so much unresolved on the Steve front. He spends so much time standing silently on the sidelines when big decisions are made. Will he finally start thinking for himself? Can he stick to the decisions he makes? He's shown himself to be a vacillating coward so far. If he stays with Clay, he'll have to come out. Can he see a future possibly without pro football? Also, I wouldn't be surprised if readers take issue with Clay and Steve being intimate so soon after the attack. To that I would say, people heal in different ways. Who are we to judge? Also: more Heidi!
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The only character I feel bad for is Clay. He's the one suffering because of his own insecurities, combined with the fact that he's allowed himself to be at the mercy of two boys (neither has behaved like a man) who can't decide what they want and treat him like a toy to fight over. While I know Clay will probably wind up with one of them, I wish he'd go see that therapist for a couple years and realize he deserves better - and can do better - than both of them. Coming of age stories like this irritate the hell outta me (probably because my old ass came of age long ago) but Clay keeps me coming back. My only hope is that characters start talking and stop avoiding in the next chapter.
