I've really enjoyed the story so far, though there has been a few things that bugged me. For instance the way some of the staff talks about Silver like he isn't there. Detached or not, it's very unprofessional. And how could River shower in one of the residents showers? I work in a carehome and that's a big no-no.
But as I've said, overall a great story so far!
Chapter 2 – I wonder how far this road goes.
I couldn't decide if the situation was utterly horrible or if it was absolutely wonderful. The expressions on my friends faces told me that they thought it was simply hilarious. Damn them.
“Fredrik, I'm jealous!” Astrid said in a voice much too loud for the occasion.
“Shh! Seriously...”
“I'm jealous too.” Robin said, ignoring me. “You never cuddle with me like that.”
“Shut up you guys. You'll wake him up.”
“Aaw, listen. His snores are so cute.”
Thanks His mother's story will be explained later on, dont worry
Snowy Road is definitely a story I want to continue writing on. I felt kind of stuck every time i tried to write on it so I'm thinking a shorter story like this might be just what I need
Chapter 1 – Oskar Wahl. Who else?
As the day came to an end and the last rays of sunlight peeked over the horizon, you could hear the sound of doors being shut and locks put in place throughout the village. For someone with no knowledge of the situation this would surely strike them as odd. You see, the village was nothing more than a small settlement, a gathering of houses and farmland in a long forgotten part of the Scandinavian fells. Why lock your door when the risk of trespassers is practi
Fredrik goes on a school trip to the Swedish Fells for some hiking. Despite his awkwardness towards Oskar, the PE class kid, coincidences seem to constantly push them into spending time together.
I'm not dead Just got very busy after christmas At the moment I'm juggling full time uni studies with two part-time jobs hehe.
I have to sit down sometime when I don't have as much going on and reread my story, it's been on my mind lately so please continue to be patient
I'm actually working on a shorter three part story just to keep writing but I'm not going to publish it until I'm done.(I really, really like it so far. Heh.) Look forward to that
I loved the story but the ending kind of left me unsatisfied, I didn't really care much for Chandler though so his death(?) just made think "Oh well...". Still, there's plenty of stuff yet to be resolved, an epilogue would be nice
Aw, it makes me so happy that you like my story Happy holidays to you too! I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible, stuff just seems to get in the way at the moment
Hehe, I'll totally grow to love the 'nerds', just have that kind of feeling Well, as the writer I like most of my characters, even Amanda, so... Thanks for reading ^^
Chapter 8 – A Weird Fellowship
Knots were forming in my stomach as I approached the school parking the day after the fight with Amanda. More people were bound to know my secret by now, I hoped that the rumor at least hadn't reached the ears of the 'cool' kids. I'd thought everything over yesterday night and I realized that a lot of people wouldn't really care, it's not like I was the quarterback of the football team or anything, but I couldn't help thinking that some select few would try to hur