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    Assignments

    Wow, wow and wow, hot damn. Great chapter, thank you.
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    Sister Sara

    Dannys' equations just made the Fleet Admirals' day. Now his eye for shiny rocks, made him and his friends richer. Things are about to get interesting I would venture to say. Great chapter, thank you.
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    R & R

    Identical enhancements, so if Danny is a genius, then it stands to reason that Tom is one to. Their importance to this story just went up a few notches. This is getting more exciting. Great chapter, thank you.
  4. I am getting the impression that Tom and Danny are two of the main characters of this story. Just what are you leading us up to? Feels like the calm before a storm. Great chapter, thank you.
  5. Routine is settling in. Now we have our two young Lts in the spot light, I wonder why? Great chapter, thank you.
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    Under Way

    A Task Force and they are armed for bear. As their speed builds, so does my anticipation. Great chapter, thank you.
  7. Great, the title is explained. We know the mission, its importance and that what ever the cargo is that they are carrying is vital to the war if not their very survival. Great chapter, thank you.
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    Introduction

    No matter how far in the future this is set, somethings don't seem to change. The good guys (Alliance) with the good times allowed complacency to creep in. Then bam, the bad guys show up and now they are almost up the proverbial creek with out a paddle. Great start, thank you.
  9. So now he knows the harm he can do, even if unintentional. He still hasn't realized how to control his protection defence, so that his friends don't forget him. Eleven and now a J/ Lt, serving as 3rd Eng Officer on a ship. How far will they (HQ) let him keep on going, before he finds out that they know exactly what he has been doing. A really great chapter, thank you very much.
  10. So much to learn and new to experience. It is about time something good happened to them. H is a definite military type, but I worry that M is not and if so would they be separated. A really great chapter, thank you.
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    Part 27

    I wonder what the significance of Sonic singing to the little girl is. Wow, they (AIs) are going to help him build his space ship. Yes they (AIs) are prepping, but the Cadre and Rogue still worry me. This was a great chapter, thank you.
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    Odyssey

    Mark, this is by far my favourite story in GA. I hope you continue with Grangers' adventures when the Odyssey comes to an end, as all good thing must. Thank you for the all hours of enjoyment you have given to me and I'm sure the many more than just the 93 who admitted it did. Sandrewn
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    Chapter 64

    If any one deserved a chapter of his own it is Winkler. Thanks for that Mark. Kindly make that last surprise (a wife) go away. Get him (them) back safe. Great chapter, thank you.
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    Chapter 63

    Whether it be in a tent in the Egyptian desert or the hold of a French ship of the line, George seems always get his man. Now he is off to Gay Paree. Winkler is one step closer to home, that would mean no one from your poll wins as first home. Lord St. Vincent is one happy dude, now knowing his favourite Admiral and Captian are together and going after the French fleet. Great chapter, thank you.
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    Chapter 62

    Granger has the ability to look at the big picture, something the other two do not. No help is coming. There is little food, conditions are bad. For the mens' own well being, he believes that if they help, they will get fed (as well as the French crew) and be treated better. That the sooner the repaired ship can get to a port the men would be better off. It is his nature to care for them even though they are not his own crew. That he told them he would take the heat if they were brought to task for doing so demonstrates why his own men were so loyal. Great chapter, thank you.
  16. Mark this is not a review. I just felt a need to post here. I was trying to figure out why my internet was down. Then when it came back up, the first thing I saw was the New York skyline, the towers and smoke. As the reports started to come in, the very first thing I thought of, was the world as we knew it had forever changed. My next thought was of a day in the early 60s as I looked out from the observation deck of the Empire State building, saw the iconic Macys sign in giant letters, and the two new towers beening built with cranes working on their tops. That was my only visit to New York. The following is more in line with my time in the military, but I think it works here. They shall not grow old, as we that are left grow old: Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn. As the going down of the sun and in the morning. We will remember them. R.I.P.
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    Chapter 1

    I think if I was Koen, where ever he was now, was better than the fate of those, who went to the table like his uncle. Great start, thank you.
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    Prologue

    It makes the story easier to follow, from the outset. I often have to look up some terms that are used, this makes it more enjoyable. Thank you.
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    Fundamental Unity

    We have the answers to all of the questions from before, thank you very much. Now what to do it, how to use it, where to go from here. Then of course there are still the bad guys out there and countless creatures roaming about. Wherever you take us from this point onwards is all icing on the cake, thank you.
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    Light Of Faith

    Calm has been restored, all is right with the Universe, you are off the hook (for now). My kind of chapter, thank you.
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    Innocence Lost

    This is the first time in this story that I find did not enjoy the chapter. If I wanted to feel sadness, I just have to look at what is happening all around in the world today. Having said that I will hold off any judgement, to see what next occurs in the story.
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    Shield Of Spirit

    The saying was, physician heal thy self, I guess now its.......... . This was a great chapter, thank you. You went and did it to us again, out of the frying pan and into the fire.
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    Beautiful Resolve

    One is a warrior, the other can be when it is called for. So there is some sort of military around, what do they want, do they know about him? Can they get away? What happened to our Russian? More please. Great chapter, thank you.
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    Perfect Bonds

    Exciting chapter, answers and lots of action. Then, then you go and pull a cliff hanger on us, good job, damn it!
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    Latent Revelation

    Two hundred plus years, if they were still alive he could sue the manufacturer. So now they have the data and know the story. Could Shay be the cure for all those that are left alive. What a meaning that would give to his existance, a real purpose to his life. Thank you for this great chapter.
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