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The Witness delegates meeting with Wirrin shows how far he has come. That Pirramar would be spending so much of his time with Wirrin, shows how important his (Wirrin) imput is to their future. Great chapter, thank you.
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WOW, life expectancy 300 Years. Yikes, Sonic might die in 4 years. What a range of emotions. Great chapter, thank you.
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Blue is Blue, Sonic is Sonic (a unique shock wave spreading out into the universe). To be told that they are well into level 2 was an unexpected, yet not suprising revelation. What is this life extension mentioned? This was a great chapter, thank you.
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This has turned into a dead zone again. It was on this day (17 July) that the Czar of All the Russias and his family met their end. The following are other items of interest (to some) with regards to today ( I am not a song and dance sort of guy, so this will have to do). http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/July_17
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Chapter 6: Supersoakers
sandrewn commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 6: Supersoakers
It is seems strange that the boys of his element have all but forgotten him. That none seem to care that he was in actual combat. Is he subconsciously causing it or is Fleet some how doing it. Fleet knows of his past, they observed what he did on the ship, what are they upto, what are they planning? Great chapter, thank you. -
One more congatulation is in order, I just noticed that you have gone from 9th to 6th on the T.R.S. list of GA.
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I would add my congratulations on the big five. Looking forwards to many more. Of note, today is also 'International Lefthanders' Day'. I don't suppose you might be left handed, Mark? As you might of guessed. I am. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_Lefthanders_Day http://www.indiana.edu/~primate/left.html#U.S.%20Presidents As I recall, I screwed up with my Dhow Theory. Now here you go and solve the problem with a mere few rocks, just 15 war canoes (dugouts mayhaps?) and 300 some odd and very restless natives. Well done Mr Arbour. Oh, and btw could you please arrange to save Kingsdales' bagpipes.
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You have once again (as expected) taken the threads of this Odyssey and braided them into a most complex seamans' pigtail (tale). As speculated, Granger would indeed never again command Bacchante. Poor Humphreys, two up, two down, will he get a third chance. Sir Tobias, fish food, most fitting being taken out by (fellow) pirates and devoured by (greedily hungry) sharks. I think they will hold off those war canoes. I think the cavalry (Calvert) will show up in time to rescue them and the silver. I also think that somehow (devious Mark) Mr Eastwyck and his crew will gain control of a French Corvette of 20 guns and assist as well. Great chapter, thank you. But Mark if you do nothing else, save those Bagpipes, I love the sound of them.
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I read this long after your return, hope it was a good one. The bad guys are really persistent, knowing how AIs think almost most won them the day. That is why our trio member is of such importance to them (AIs). As Thom pointed out, 'you think differently than them'. Each the three is special and they compliment each other. So the journey to a new world for some, home to others begins. Great chapter, thank you.
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You ran the full gamut of emotions in this one. So much to take in, and then, you end it with a red alert, what a nasty thing to do( well done). Great chapter, thank you.
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I think Sonic is about to 4to take center stage and steal the show. To these Earthers, life will never be the same. Great chapter, thank you.
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Let me see. A one day old Knighthood. A new midshipman as a favour to HRH. A new Master that he knows and trusts. Throw in an extra 5,000 pounds. Then a favour to the Spanish Ambassador. Orders to sail ASAP. Then to top it all off, forced to take a reporter/spy along with him. Your usual block buster start to a new series. Thank you Mark.
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For Georges to see Jardines (for probably the last time) was a nice touch. Nelson's interaction and candid sit down talk, was revealing. A man who George admired and respected as a superior and friend. Basically enumerated his (Granger's) career and advancements to date and with that as a base speculated on his future (I think he was spot on). This was as good a chapter in its' own way as its' predecessors. Thank you. Mark, if you are conforming to future historical events (as you have to date), then you truly are an evil person. However, that would most likely make me a winner in the poll.
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Mark I agree with you about Villenneuve. What I am not so sure is the why (he didn't). Something I have always believed in and curiously found in a story I once read. From 'The Kandric Saga' by Kyle Aarons. In chapter 12, between Capt. Vondum and his slave/squire Conth: " To try and fail means you failed. Failure is second worse to only one thing, fear. To not try, due to fear, means failure and you disgrace yourself in the process." P.S. Kyle, if by chance you read this, please post your next chapter, thanks in advance.
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A spectacular Climax. Though victory was all but assured, when L'Orient blew up, literally vapourizing hundreds of her crew, the Frenchs' back was broken and all knew what the final outcome would be. Had Villenneuve's Division come to their aid, history might have changed (at least to the degree of the victory), as he did not, history stands. George did everything a(any) Captain of the Fleet should/could have done. When you factor in that he was all but dropped into the position, on the eve of the battle, his performance becomes all the more noteworthy. An extraordinary chapter, thank you mark
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Mark, your ability to describe the excitement and feel of this action is amazing. Your words have placed us all inside the battle. If I close my eyes it is like an IMAX 3D experience with my mind suppling the imagined sounds, lacking only the the actual taste and smell of the burning gun powder. Glorious, thank you.
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No ship, so of course what else is there to do but make George 'The Captain of the Fleet', brilliant! Then news from home, mostly good, with a few new questions needing answers. His experiences and knowledge from Toulon are really making him an asset to Nelson and the looming engagement. Great chapter, thank you.
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I had to go back and reread the chapters after George's description of John's passing. It got to me again as it did then. Once again you have set the scene for George's involvement with history (even without his ship). Reviewing late allowed me to read your other replies. I did note (honest) and wonder that at the meal a certain midshipman (with a branded cheek) that I expected to see was absent. It finally hit George that what he had accomplished really was extraordinary by the looks of awe on his fellow Captains' faces. A truly great chapter and setup for what is to come. Thank you.
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Justice institute tried to off them. HQ (the good bots?) now has them and needs them, a bot war has started. They are right in the middle of it all. Will they make the difference that is needed. Good chapter, thank you.
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So they are bot executioners. There are bot factions, some bots want them dead. Some humans want them dead. Time flies when you are having fun. Good chapter, thank you.
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I honestly don't know what to comment on. I found the chapter interesting and enjoyed reading it. Thank you.
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I read it twice, you still have me hooked. Good chapter, thank you.
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I have on occasion been green with envy. I've been told that I have a green thumb. You have taken it to whole new level. Can't wait to find out why. Then add their newly acquired mind linking abilities. I must have more chapters, please. Thank you.
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This is the first of your stories I have come across. It has captured my attention. Odd maybe, interesting definately. Thank you.
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Chapter 5: The Reality of the Reverends
sandrewn commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 5: The Reality of the Reverends
This really is a perverted universe you have painted for us. I worry for Matthew and hope that Hamish ( much like Paul ) will be able to somehow help him. Great chapter, thank you. Note: Thanks for your heads up to me.
