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Great start to the new book of the series.
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I think that what JJ did was great. I think JJ is the most spoiled one out of the brothers. so I really think that plane trip, did him really good.
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I have figured out who is behind this bull shit. It is two people the first one is Alex's father on the England side of the plot and for the problem of will and Zach it is Elizabeth. The way i came up with this conclusion is I remember you wrote in the wedding chapter that they both were seen talking to eachother. And why would Elizabeth care who Alex sees on the side besides who else would want to hurt Alex than his father. Also we know that Alex and his father hate eachother's guts.
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I agree with mmike1969 that Zach is being blackmail into this. But at the same time I want to ring Zach neck for hurting will. Can't wait until next chapter is posted. I just hope that Alex & JJ and will & zach get back together.
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Mark that was a great chapter but one thing i did notice that was not correct is your information on the music piece "Ode to Joy" you said by Bach but it was written by Friedrich Schiller as a poem.And Composed by Ludwig Van Beethoven. Other than that it was a great chapter.
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That was a great chapter! We all missed you. At least I am glad to have you back. I think that was the best thing Zach's dad could of said to him.
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great chapter Mark. I can't believe that Brad blew off JJ birthday like that it makes me mad when Brad does something so childish. I wonder if you could make Mary Ellen could have a miscarriage so Alex doesn't have to marry her. Just saying.
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First off let me start by saying Mark you out did yourself this chapter! I loved the way you had Zach confront Marc ex-boyfriend David . Can't wait for the dinner were the art dealer is invited to. Brad should've known that will and Zach was having sex that is why you always knock. So over all I give this chapter .
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Love it all ready I want more. can't wait until the next chapter. I love how you are able to describe the charters and the scene as well.
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I so want to see JJ go ape shit with Brad I wonder if he will destroy Brads new car? or will he do something more lets say major.
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OMG! That was so funny that Zach acted like he hurt his ankle running the laps. It took care of that dumbass Assistant Coach. And when It said Will wrote that guys name down I was like oh shit he is in huge trouble.
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Chapter 45: Final Chapter
bhsgrad08 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45: Final Chapter
Oh my goodness Mark you truly have a gift for writing I loved how you combined Bridgemont with CAP. I am so glad that Matt and Wade are back together. keep updating cap series cause I love the series. -
I scream you scream we all scream for more!
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First off I am glad that will and his cousin patched up their relationship. But did there have to be a straight sex scene? Also before i forget to ask you could you bring back robbie pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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WTF How could you end a chapter like that. with that being said about time Winkler and Jacobs got together. and can you say cat fight
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It's just sad to see a bright young man trapped in the death grip of drugs. Hopefully Jeff will win the war that he is fighting inside himself. and chose family over a quick high.
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I loved this chapter I would of loved to been there and seen how Carol freaked out about the fart. and when he called her a whore.
