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Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Dance With the Devil
a nice spookie story right before halloween, i enjoy all of your halloween stories. BTW, i have read all of the Castaway books and wondered if it's to be continued -
i thoroughly enjoyed this story Bill, a chance meeing between two boys leads to some fun times and a life long friendship. it kind of remends me of a boy i met as youngster, we were great friends for about four or five years. we never did anything sexual even though i believe we both wanted to but were afraid to try. i lost track of him after high school, some years later i heard he was looking for me but we never met up again.
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very cool continuation of a cliff hanger. Devin transitions to a Bigfoot and Mac follows suit, the fact that Mac could change into something he's never seen while still in training is amazing . i have a fealing he may be even more talented than the others
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Damn i hate cliffhangers, LOL. is it an evil skinwalker? it has red eyes and deformed features, maybe it's the Shaman testing Mac and Devin's observation skills??
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excelent chapter Bill, i love how observent Mac is and ask's questions that may help him understand what it is to be a Skinwalker. being around Devin and his family seems to make it easyer for Mac to start transitioning into other forms.
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not only are your stories entertaining but they are also informative. i already knew a lot about the Navajo but i learned more reading this chapter. 🙂
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getting raped anytime is aweful but on valentines day is even worse....i believe rapeist's should be hung and not necessarily by the neck
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it was nice that Mac got to spend the holiday with his grandparents as it may be the last. i'll bet the kids at the hospital will be convinced it's the real Santa as i'm sure Devin's transition will be great
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it was good to have both family's together for a nice Fourth of July celebration. i don't know why, but the very last part of this chapther remined my of your story "Mental Games"
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Damn Bill, this story just keeps getting more and more interesting with each chapter. there are some things i knew and more i didn't. I find myself reading faster so i can find what happens next. Great story
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so devin a type of shape shifter, maybe some kind of built in defence mechanism?
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i've decided to re-read the castaway series since it's so enjoyable and i noticed something in this chapter i had somehow missed before. just when did Robert settle down and get married? Robert, Sara?
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great story Bill, a nice spooky ending. it's also sad, and reminds me of my teens & early 20's. i was a teen in the '70s, and it seemed like just about everybody was drinking and druging. my town even had a nic-name "Hangover Park" (Hanover Park) there was always a huge party somewhere. too many parents let it happen and i lost several friends to AOD, drug OD and DUI car crashes. i have no idea how i survived, many times i drove home with one eye closed to kill the double vision. i just hope somewhere, there is a teen or early 20's that reads your story and subsequent comments, and makes the choice to not drink or do drugs.
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Chapter 1: The House Sitter
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The House Sitter
being so close to halloween i was sure it was going to be spooky, i was not disapointed, i loved it. great discription of the ghost's and their antics. -
Chapter 1 - Crash Landing
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Crash Landing
i somehow missed this story when it came out but am glad i found it now. i totaly enjoyed it, slightly reminiscent of "The Stand" but with a twist ending, and a cure. -
very enjoyale story Bill, it had me hooked from the start and it just got better as it progressed. Adam's help with the homeless shelter and the mission, as well as his help for the Kritzers was a nice way for him to use his ability. the bording schools were also a great way to help even more young people have a better life for a long time to come.
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i don't normally comment on individual chapters, but i really like the fact Adam got donations to buy the new wheelchair for Melinda. my big sister had M.S. so it just makes me feal good reading this chapter, people helping other with handicaps. so far this book just keeps getting more interesting as it progresses.
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Chapter 1 - A Truly Terrifying Experience
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - A Truly Terrifying Experience
wow, that was a spooky story. i've read all your Halloween stories and i think this is the best of them all. -
Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
wow, what a saga it's been. from little Ricky Glover comming to live with josh as a little boy, to will anybody in the family be affected by Covid. this has been another great book and i hope someday you will continue the story of my favorite family -
Chapter 22 - Saying Good-bye
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Saying Good-bye
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Chapter 10 - One Strange Board Meeting
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 10 - One Strange Board Meeting
i loved this chapter, the way josh keeps making the guy look the fool by useing his own words against him. 'having a battle of wits with an unarmed man', lol so funny -
Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 39 - A Christmas To Remember
i have read this book and all the others many times while waiting for the new book to be finished. but every time i read this chapter i still get teary-eyed when the boys read their adoption certificates -
Chapter 9 – Finishing Up In Philly.
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 9 – Finishing Up In Philly.
when i saw you were writing book, 4 i was very happy as i had e-mailed you some years ago and you said book 3 was the last one. i remember you said "this story could go on forever" so i thought i'd seen the end of the currie clan. i like your new style of writing with trey and josh telling each chapter. i knew ricky would SOMEDAY settle down. i cant wait to see what frankie is up to, he was one of favorites and i always thought he would make a major impact in the world -
great book bill, it took me awhile to get used to danny telling the story but it was a nice change. please tell me you are going to write another book, we need to know what happens with the O-hara-currie family. maybe have dion perform professionally a few times, does Joshie keep up with his singing? there are just so many things I would like to know how it turns out, I just love these stories and I really hope you continue.
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Chapter 1 - Role Reversal
bemeupscoty commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Role Reversal
this was a great story and reminds me of myself. I went from bullied to bully to stopping bully's, all in four years of high school. too bad similar things to happen to all the J.J.'s of the world
