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a nice spookie story right before halloween, i enjoy all of your halloween stories. BTW, i have read all of the Castaway books and wondered if it's to be continued

i thoroughly enjoyed this story Bill, a chance meeing between two boys leads to some fun times and a life long friendship. it kind of remends me of a boy i met as youngster, we were great friends for about four or five years. we never did anything sexual even though i believe we both wanted to but were afraid to try. i lost track of him after high school, some years later i heard he was looking for me but we never met up again.

very cool continuation of a cliff hanger. Devin transitions to a Bigfoot and Mac follows suit, the fact that Mac could change into something he's never seen while still in training is amazing . i have a fealing he may be even more talented than the others

Damn i hate cliffhangers, LOL. is it an evil skinwalker? it has red eyes and deformed features, maybe it's the Shaman testing Mac and Devin's observation skills??

excelent chapter Bill, i love how observent Mac is and ask's questions that may help him understand what it is to be a Skinwalker. being around Devin and his family seems to make it easyer for Mac to start transitioning into other forms.

not only are your stories entertaining but they are also informative. i already knew a lot about the Navajo but i learned more reading this chapter. 🙂

getting raped anytime is aweful but on valentines day is even worse....i believe rapeist's should be hung and not necessarily by the neck

it was nice that Mac got to spend the holiday with his grandparents as it may be the last. i'll bet the kids at the hospital will be convinced it's the real Santa as i'm sure Devin's transition will be great

it was good to have both family's together for a nice Fourth of July celebration. i don't know why, but the very last part of this chapther remined my of your story "Mental Games"

Damn Bill, this story just keeps getting more and more interesting with each chapter. there are some things i knew and more i didn't. I find myself reading faster so i can find what happens next. Great story

so devin a type of shape shifter, maybe some kind of built in defence mechanism?

i've decided to re-read the castaway series since it's so enjoyable and i noticed something in this chapter i had somehow missed before. just when did Robert settle down and get married? Robert, Sara?

great story Bill, a nice spooky ending. it's also sad, and reminds me of my teens & early 20's. i was a teen in the '70s, and it seemed like just about everybody was drinking and druging. my town even had a nic-name "Hangover Park" (Hanover Park) there was always a huge party somewhere. too many parents let it happen and i lost several friends to AOD, drug OD and DUI car crashes. i have no idea how i survived, many times i drove home with one eye closed to kill the double vision. i just hope somewhere, there is a teen or early 20's that reads your story and subsequent comments, and makes the choice to not drink or do drugs.

being so close to halloween i was sure it was going to be spooky, i was not disapointed, i loved it. great discription of the ghost's and their antics.

i somehow missed this story when it came out but am glad i found it now. i totaly enjoyed it, slightly reminiscent of "The Stand" but with a twist ending, and a cure.