So here's my two-bits.
Whoa, boy: throw is right in at the deep end of an inciting incident why don't you? Put the sledgehammer down Gary, my head hurts between the ears. These of course, are all good things.
I like what you've done, and I have no idea where this is going, which is always a bonus at the end of a first chapter. The two guys seem cool, pretty rounded but not fully laid bare. Any issues around that can be sort of swept under the carpet, because it's your first time and I'm gonna bet at this stage that you're more aware/nervous of any potential faults than we are. Considering I spent the first... three years of writing, writing shit (and I count those years from when i start posting on the web, not what I wrote as a kid), you can colour me jealous.
Ma, and everyone else was right, you write like you review, and you know what I think of your reviews. If you make me cry I'mma hold it against you.