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Sasha Distan

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  1. Do I want to know what that is?
  2. you guys have such fancy tractors. Even the best one at the farm is made of swearing and bad suspension.
  3. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    possibly. Also, credit where it's due - Nathan is fantastic in bed. Taylor is a busy guy, he likes Nate, and he wasn't looking for true love or anything; these thing just fall into a mutually beneficial routine. Up until now of course.
  4. Who answers when you knock?
  5. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 6

    mostly now i am just giggling at the idea of a guy who owns a John Deere tractor trying to fit into Ashlee's wardrobe...
  6. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 5

    you just about said it all there.
  7. I write about a lot of the things that would otherwise be called 'triggers' for myself, and plenty of others too I expect. And for me at least, this takes away from their strength, even if it doesn't nullify them.
  8. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    yeah I'm making you feel bad for Nathan. He's a person worth love too - I'll show you that eventually.
  9. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    oh you are all sorts of mean and hating on Nate. you don't really want him having a second chance, eh?
  10. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    I'll still be taking that as a win then. Yeah, personally I never understood the whole "real men don't cry thing" I will whimper likeca lost pup in front of Marley and Me, let alone anything serious.
  11. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    A case for child abuse by neglect and operant conditioning with bigotry? Sounds about right. I promise there is a man worth loving under all of that, I'll dig him out for you. As always, we appreciate your eloquent thoughts.
  12. ohhhh... so many things I can't say I promise nothing bad will happen to Cayman. You have my word.
  13. So here's my two-bits. Whoa, boy: throw is right in at the deep end of an inciting incident why don't you? Put the sledgehammer down Gary, my head hurts between the ears. These of course, are all good things. I like what you've done, and I have no idea where this is going, which is always a bonus at the end of a first chapter. The two guys seem cool, pretty rounded but not fully laid bare. Any issues around that can be sort of swept under the carpet, because it's your first time and I'm gonna bet at this stage that you're more aware/nervous of any potential faults than we are. Considering I spent the first... three years of writing, writing shit (and I count those years from when i start posting on the web, not what I wrote as a kid), you can colour me jealous. Ma, and everyone else was right, you write like you review, and you know what I think of your reviews. If you make me cry I'mma hold it against you.
  14. So, time to vote... Has Nathan reached rock bottom yet, and if not, how far can he possibly have left to fall?
  15. when is "I'll tell you when you're older"?
  16. Hubby wants to go and see "Man Who Falls In Love With An A.I. In A Box: The Movie" tomorrow night - so I'll be back with opinions, spoilers and scathing commentary afterwards.
  17. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    but how's he going to do that? Everything in his universe in on that ranch...
  18. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    Cole Senior is a real piece of work, I'll give you that.And yeah, it's totally Nate's job to do the work now - he knows he's wrong. Taylor is too strong for fake apologies and too smart for grand but empty gestures. we'll see, eh?
  19. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 2

    He's not on his knees already? OK, so he nearly is, but I promise nothing will happen to Cayman. Good horses deserve better.I like the idea of a tape on loop, and that's pretty much where Nathan is right now.
  20. I wonder what kind of switches Mann had under there. Blue Alps maybe? Addy - take care of your cables! I think mine suffered because I wrapped it up and put a cable tie around the bunch which kept them permanently bent over. damn it.
  21. Nathan stood in front of his mirror and flicked his shirt collar up in order to begin the laborious process of wrapping his tie around his neck. He had always thought that ties were some kind of torture device. They were hard to do right and felt like a noose around his throat, but there was no way Nathan would be seen without one. Not today. It was gloriously sunny, in some defiance of the probability of early November rain, and as Nathan stepped out of his trailer he scowled up at the cold cle
  22. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 4

    I can say nothing! No spoilers!Thank you for taking the time to leave some reviews. It is always greatly appreciated.
  23. Sasha Distan

    Chapter 3

    Clem will find support of a very specific sort.I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. Thank you.
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