Ranveer

lucky Bay but kind of shows Bay in a bad light, a bit too much. Wish an intelligent and sharp girl like Lena had never let things drag on for long.

nice start. thought provoking. just one thing though. "I am an average looking guy. What are my chances of finding true love?" i dont see how "true love"(or just love, u can say) is related to looks? there are something like 7 billion people out there in the world. may be if there was just 1 guy out there, and the rest of the 699,999,9999 people coveting for his love, may be it would come down to details like good looks and stuff.

awwwwwwww i loved jim-boy wish he wasnt the way he was ;p may be there could have been an alternate expanation. jim boy defending the guy from the rest of his gang members. + xyz lolz think of something.

"pouring whiskey on a burning petrol station.." would be fun to read ;p

“I don’t see why being gay has to be all there is about me. Making your sexuality your defining feature like the faaaab-ulous crowd down there is just pathetic. Being gay is part of who I am, it’s not everything I am.” very good

nice, but 5 seems too young. wish Mister Terry makes a reappearance in some later chapter

love your writing