Ron
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The ending of the story in such a blunt force manner sucked all the enjoyment out of learning about the characters. The adventurous road trip disappeared somewhere along the journey without finishing and then the author slapped the reader in the face with the end. If more of a connection were to have been made between those two points, the ending still wouldn't have been easy to digest but it would have made more sense.
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I rather enjoyed the story. It contains some rather too frequent issues facing some youths, gay or otherwise, but it deals with the situation rather even handedly in the context and length of the story. A more lengthy read would be required to explore anything further with greater depth.
