fiedlerbob101

that was great ....................is there more................ im sad that this story ended......it was a wonderful read

WOW u don't disappoint................but seriously another cliff hanger? u really are evil.

I cannot believe u left us hanging again man ur evil

outstanding, keep it coming i am so hooked Bob

I cant believe ur gonna leave us hanging like this............................REALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I dont suppose you could like post the next chapter tonight? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for taking the time to write this tale Bob

Thanks for writing ....this is a wonderful story

The plot thickens i loved it....thanks for writing Bob

as always u made things feel so real. I look forward to each chapter simply because each of your characters seems so real. thanks for taking the time to write Bob

I love ur work this is such a wonderful story and i cannot wait to see what happens next, thanks for tanking the time to tell this tale

you have no idea how sad I am that this story has ended. The ranch, the boys and their antics will be sorely missesd. This has been such a wonderful adventure and I am gonna miss them, for the last few years they have been part of my life and now that its over I will have this empty place in my mind that onlythey can fill. Please consider writing more about them once you finish your other projects. thanks for taking your time to tell this tale Bob

As always you never let us down, this is another wonderfully written chapter that is gonna keep us all on edge till next thursday................. thanks... you just keep writtin and we will keep eating it up.......thanks for taking the time to write ur story Bob

Andrew, you never cease to amaze me, you never dissapoint and always touch my heart with each word thanks for taking the time to write this tale Bob

Andrew, thank you for taking the time to tell your story, i loved this chapter and how things seem to be flowing smoothly, I cant wait to see how bottom is gonna fallout lol. Your such a wonderful teller of tales. thanks Bob

I think ur doing just fine in telling this tale. ITs captavating and pulls you in. Being able to spin a yarn is not an easy thing. It requires talent and the better the talent the more your readers devour your writing. Spelling Errors, gramatical errors and alike are what they are. Do they get int the way of understanding the story.......no. I enjoy your writing and think this story is wonderfully told......I dont know why everyone thinks they can be a critic .... Tell your tale and spin it as you wish..... thanks for taking the time to write this tale for us to read Bob

Andrew.............I cannot believe u left us all hanging like that, really??????????????you have got to be kidding me....ur gonna need to post that next chapter soooooooon I dont know if i can wiat that long thanks for taking the time to write us this story Bob

Andrew, They say that gifted story tellers are people who have the ability to take tall tale and make it believable. they embellish it, mold it stretch it and contort it to make it there very own. The give it life and make it stand on its own merit. Andrew your story does all of that and more, your characters, Danny CJ, Ace, Zack,Dusty, Jessie Dylan Mattie, Spin are like old friends now and i so enjoy reading about my friends, what there up to and seeing them overcome there difficulties. And knowing that all of this is simply a tale you pulled out of your mind makes you a gifted story teller more specifically a gifted liar. Andrew I love your lies lol and I agree with jikarn this would be an awesome series for TV, No kidding my friend this Drama has everything and more for that outlet. thank you again Andrew for telling another lie I cannot wait for the next chapter Bob

Andrew, you are by far my favorite author, I, so glad your back and the boys are out and about,...it seems like for ever that they had been sitting dormant and just waiting for the next chapter. I am pretty sure i speak for all of us.......Welcome back and we all look forward to your next chapter. This chapter was awesome and i look forward to see how things work out Bob