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  1. Sonya

    Chapter 5

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I couldn't agree more with CW. I think it is disgusting that in our democratic society religious bigotry is allowed. Not only that they twist the Bible to suit themselves but do not see the real world around them. I know it is outlawed but it is horrible to think people, especially those of the cloth, have the right to pass judgement and allow this barbaric behaviour. There is nowhere in the Bible that justifies this behaviour at all. God made humankind and as Macklemore says love is universal not onesided. Everyone should be free to love who they wish without conditions or prejudice
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    Chapter 4

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 4

    I hate zealots but damn I hate cliff hangers even more. Please let him come out of this alright and god I hope Josh is not hurt either by this, which is a dumb thing to say but as CW said don't let him be damaged beyond repair!!
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    Chapter 4

    Sonya commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Poor Benny but Ellis is adorable and you know when he sets his mind to it he will figure something out. Can't wait for the next installment
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    Chapter 3

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Is this the calm before the storm. Mother's are insightful to their children and Josh not underestimate his dear Mother. I wonder if they would be okay or not because it is going to come out soon.
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    Chapter 2

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 2

    What a wonderful chapter. It was so heartwarming to see Daniel show Josh how beautiful a first experience can be. I really like Daniel and am excited about seeing how this is going to develop You already know this but I love your stories and writing
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    Chapter 1

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    As I am going backwards from Enigma 1 & 2 to here it is nice to see the contrast. Daniel from Josh's first perspective sounded dangerous but not in the way we thought. An innocent meeting up with a strong personality and individual like Daniel can capture you straight away. I think I am going to like Daniel as Jaro he saw Josh's innocence and unawareness and that made me think of River there and seeing more that what Josh is aware of so far in himself. But... The title hints at more to come so I can't wait to continue on the journey with these two and see what unfolds
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    Epilogue

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Epilogue

    Nephy this was an amazing journey and I am so pleased that in the end the family is together. It seemed short and sweet but after everything they have gone through they deserved to have a break. Brilliant writing, amazing characters and the storyline well is/was and always will be supurb :worship:
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    Finally River well done. Another brilliant chapter and I am so glad they both came clean in how they are feeling. Good on Ariel and will Silver take up a position in the club?? Thank you Nephy
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    You've done it again. What a briliant chapter and I like Belinda she will be a good psychiatrist. It is good that he recognizes that River is not having an easy time but he is strong enough to talk to him about Ash. I loved this chapter
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    It was good to see that click in place for River so maybe he will now start accepting that Silver isn't cured but healing. He isn't his carer anymore but his partner. He will still need assistance, don't we all, but he is growing and yes this is one of my favourite chapters too. Seeing how Silver has really moved forward. River had better take Sam's advise or else I have a feeling he is going to learn that the free Silver has a temper lol
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    Such a beautiful chapter and very cethartic to both of them. Well written Nephy as always
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    What a sad but beautiful chapter. River has got to get over his jealousy, it is only because he doesn't understand but I ams so proud of Silver. Standing up to Tony and supporting Ariel. Going home with River I hope River appreciates and listens to Silver this time. He may have come to realizations but he has got to put them into practise and then there is the two big issues - Trust and respect Silver for who he is and what he has become
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    This chapter is undescribable. Heartwrenching but good in a way for Ash as he is finally at peace, I hope Tony rots in Hell. But the irony of Sam and River being there at the hospital. Honestly I am in shock
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    OMG What have you done Nephy not Ash!!! FFS it should have been Tony the bastard!!
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    Loved the chapter and hate Tony as I know he is up to no good. He knows who Silver was and I hope he hasn't done something silly in his jealousy. Asher is remarkable. I hope whoever the client is though is not another twist and ends up being River!! Even though Silver says he will leave and go face River I hope it is not this way. No one could be that cruel, what a deceptive mind I must have It is good that Silver remembers without repressing too but naturally there is more to come
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    I think we all forgot about his seizures, even I did, but as I have Epilepsy I understand how scary it is waking up not knowing where you are or what has happened to you yet alone someone else. Asher did the right thing but I feel he may need to track down River to get his medicine because they are going to realize it will happen again. On a brighter note Asher is in love with Silver too but knows he can't compete with Silver's love of River. Exhaustion, shock, stress all contribute to a seizure but at least he got a new hairstyle and clothes now onto the next chapter. Wish I could see the new Silver but your description is enough to make my mouth drool
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    Asher is a good foundation for River to help. I admired his determination in making Silver walk over there and face that group that was inspiring and his gift so beautiful Thank you Nephy
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    This is such a sad and sweet chapter. As I am 3 years behind the 8 ball I am reading as many as I can before my eyes fail me this is so addictive. Brilliant and sweet and tender as always. It is helping him and I am glad that he is growing into himself as a person not a slave Well done as always Nephy
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    I am stealing a part from Phana but it is so profound and true: Nephy, the darkness of this story is minuscule to the brightness of your talent! You scare us to death and breathe life (real life) back into us. Thanks so much, you! I cried and cried it was magical :worship:
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    Chapter 26 - Ariel

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Ariel

    OMG!! :worship: A standing ovation Nephy and go Silver woohoo!!
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    Chapter 25 - Asher

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Asher

    Amazing and the scene with Asher and Silver was astonishing, creative and very sensual. I think they will be good for each other for the time they have together You amaze me with your creativity but never disappoint. It is good that Ariel isn't jealous
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    I had a feeling Asher was a slave too. How sad for them both but for Asher it is good that he has been able to adapt and can help guide Silver into finding the balance he needs to survive and what a powerful statement he made at the end. Beautiful Nephy absolutely beautiful
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    I like Ariel he appears to be genuine and it is sad that he just reverted back to the norm but as he said it is what his used too. I think Asher and he are more alike then either of them know but will see what comes out of your little bag of tricks in the coming chapters me thinks!! Lewis is trouble in the making and I hope he doesn't hurt our Silver but will River find him? Will he even think of these places. As Silver has natural innocence River is also very innocent in understanding Silver and what he has gone through. As usual you leave us hooked and intrigued Great chapter
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    So Matthew is back. I can see why he did that as he hesitated but I don't think he realises that in itself is a step into self awareness as he doesn't want to be found. I wonder how long before Tony realizes what he really has there or if Matthew will explain it to him and Ariel is he going to be friend or foe?
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    Chapter 21 - Regrets

    Sonya commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Regrets

    Nephy you are amazing I am rivetted. I dread each new chapter at the moment as I know it is going from bad to worse unfortunately and again River failed the idiot. I do agree with you're earlier comment about the next chapter in that maybe Silver needs to go back before he can truly move forward but it is not going to be easy or nice for him and I knew eventually someone would slam into River's face that he was essentially Silver's Master - Sam has the patience of a saint and is adorable
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