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Loved this chapter. The conversations show that Loren is learning to express is emotion and that he is okay with Jay knowing how he feels. Jay is not perfect. He loves hard but that is just shows he is will to do whatever it takes to be there for the one he loves. I think these guys are great together. I think I felt a yes with this "proposal" maybe a hell yes!!! I'm all a twitter with the possibilities. Holding my breath for the treat!! Thanks for a great chapter.
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I believe that Loren real issue is that Jay didn't talk this decision over with him. And I think he is a little intrigued by the ideal of a family so different from what he has known. Loren is shocked that Aiden would even gravitate to him at all. Jay knows that is the main issue per is comment regarding communication. Aiden is a joy and once you are touched by joy you can't help but to warm to the exposure. Great chapter!!!!
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That was my first thought too. Then I thought it was a waking dream. Finally laughed so hard at myself. We crazy, huh!
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I hurt for Loren. I cried the whole time I was reading this. It's a wonder Loren has even gotten this far with his relationship with Jay. The trust he has for Jay is amazing.
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That was a lot. Loren is such an onion. I believe Jay is to wise to Stratego. I just imagine a smirk on his face every time he pulls it out to play. Thank you for the gift that keeps giving....Clydesdale!!! I loved every word. I laughed. I ached. I took a few breaths. Loren is dating and it looks good on him. The changes in him, new love/first love changes are just WOW. Great great chapter. PS.... Happy Birthday. Smile,
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I about fell out at Clydesdales. I just space out with a fantasy or two of my own. When I finally refocused, I had to start reading from the beginning. Needless to say, between the fantasies and the laugh out loud moments, it took a minute to complete the chapter. Loren knows he is dating. Teasing Jay with it is he new favorite thing. Next to kissing that Clydesdale!!!! I am loving every word. Thanks for another great chapter.
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I need a little Jay in my life. Ahh!!! I'm good now. What I really like and I can't guess how we're going to get where I think we are going. And is there the same place I am thinking it is going to be? The excitement, the drama and silences, not to mentions the pictures in my head. I am loving this story. It's my new favorite, favorite. Love it!! You are the best.
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Loren is so into Jay, but fear has a hard grip on him. I am not sure Loren even realizes he is afraid or why. Jay really knows himself and very little self doubt. I like that about him. His strength is just amazing. These two belong together. Great chapter. I needed this.
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I loved this chapter. Jay is getting a lot of information from Loren. We learn so much about people, their thoughts, their moods, their standards by the answers they give to the irrelevant question we ask. Our every move communications something about us. Mrsgnomie I bow to your superb writing. Jay is learning so much. And Loe you don't know it yet but you are falling. Don't sleep on the jocks. Thanks for another laugh out loud chapter. I love these guys!!!
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Thank you, thank you. I have been waiting with bated breath for this. Disappointed? NOT!! I love the line '....a secret so sweet it makes honey tastes dull like cardboard'. I am holding on to the edge of my seat for this. Reading you is like falling in love the first time.
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