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Your flow is insane. I am really loving this fire I see in Elijah. Kage!!! What a man. I mean, "I kill people." This is my couple.
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I enjoyed the ride and can't wait for the next part. Which I will be starting now.
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WOW! That was so hard. I really hurt for Rielly and his sister!! The punishment fit the crime but ....just WOW!!
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That was a lot. I feel so bad for Caleb. Definitely, no rest for the weary.
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I was right in there with them. I threw a left and a right and kick a shin or two. I was rolling up the middle did chop here and and....My mind got away from for a minute. When I got back to the story, I was surprised by Caleb changing sides again? I mean, what the what? By the way that for the new vocab, "snort icicles" for the win. Loved the action.
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If that is the result, pass be the bottle!!!! I loved it!!
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I can't. What the hecky decky is Caleb doing there!!!! I almost thru my computer across the room. So glad I am read this now and don't have to wait for the next installment. I mean what kinda person would do this to us. kbois of course.
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Calm before the storm kinda vibe. So glad the family was able to get away. I'm getting ready to RUMBLEEEEEE!!!!
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Did you just use the seven degrees of knowing people thingy? Great chapter! My head is spinning with all the information. I am like, WOW!
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I guess potatoes aren't the only thing happening in Idaho. I can't believe I missed that clue previously. I see we are about fly with seatbelts. Well done.
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PSI couple unite. Yes my pretty. I am all excited.
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It's all coming together nicely. Soothe connection. I haven't a clue what bumps and turn are coming but I am hanging on tightly.
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Oh the twists. The attraction of positive and negative. I feel the power. This is gonna be good.
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Common sense rules the day. The question is which is stronger -- common sense or fated mates hormones?
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How did you know? This is just the way I like my shifter stories. Mystery, intrigue, mating, oh yeah baby. I am eat this up with a spoon. Great story, kbois.
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Of course you would this... a couple of chapters, really?! However, you have peaked my interest with this one.
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What the hecky decky????!!!!! I am angry, I am sad, I am full of emotions. I could not pull my eyes from the story. But that ending.... The ending. So glad I was late to this party because continue without the agony of waiting..🙂
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Okay, I am definitely hook. It may be your first attempt but by golly you know what you are doing.
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Oh, that was hard. I ache for both Jay and Loren. Jay has drawn a line in the cement and it has hardened. Loren is trying. He does realize that the apology is needed but Jay needs to know that Loe loves him enough to meet half and that it is time to make a home. Loren needs to open up to Jay, all they way and hold nothing back. He should know by now that Jay is his home. Mr. G tomorrow is Monday so go on and queue that next chapter up!!!
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It was over too fast. I wanted more. Partnership with Seamus and Matt, meeting Lars, learning his truth and the foreshadowing the so called parents. It was too much and not enough. What I love about your writing is that I can't guess what will happen next. I love it. And I'm frustrated with curiosity. Thank you for the wonderful story.
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Good dreams and bad nightmares
daystorm commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Good dreams and bad nightmares
The funny is all gone. My eyes are filled with tear. My heart is caught between beats. My mind has forgotten all the good before. What have you done to me!!! I am one with Loren. I don't know what to do. Jay, Jay..... A great story brings out the dramatic in me.... -
Played like a blitz on third down
daystorm commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Played like a blitz on third down
It's all been said. I loved every word. LoJay for the touch down. YEAH!!!!- 96 comments
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Loved this chapter. Did not expect any of it. I was totally surprised. Who need Christmas with Thanksgiving is promising me everything but revealing nothing. I don't know how you do it, but please keep laying it down!!! Thank you Msgnomie!!
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My thoughts exactly. Loren knows this question was coming and that he was going to meet the parents. Instead of explaining his trepidations, he sets up this situation. I believe the request to move in has spoked him. Every time the relationship begins to transcend to the next level Loren does a little break away. But this time he put a time limit on the break. Question: If Jay waits a week does that take us past the Thanksgiving holiday? And Lars. I know that was coming but I didn't not expect a sneaky peek. I need the next chapter right now!!! This is why streaming is a good thing. My song for this chapter would be 'Rock the Boat'. Great story.
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