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Carlos Hazday
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LMAO You didn't catch it? I sat behind Owen and Danno!
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Just trying to follow the advice given by veteran writers: show, don't tell.
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Bullying, and CJ's reaction to it, have been a recurring theme. He lied when he said he doesn't advocate violence. LOL
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Great compliment! Thank you. Told ya the old guys would pop when needed. Cesar, Brett, Danno, and Trip so far. In the next chapter, Tom and JP return. I'll work my way through the Elite.
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Most talk shows I watch are political, but Ellen draws me in now and then. I'm still deciding if CJ goes Hollywood for a movie or Broadway for a play. You're gonna have to keep reading to find out. LOL
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LOL Not really... I think most Americans are familiar with the show, and I've watched particularly when I see a promo for a guest I'm interested in. Last fall, right before I wrote the chapter, I did record a week's worth of shows and binged. Then I kept hoping it would still be on the air when CJ and Trip made their appearance. I'm glad you're sticking with the story after your own binge on CJ.
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“Our next guests have taken the publishing world by storm. Their new book, Bullies Beware, has been atop the non-fiction bestseller lists since its release. Please welcome, Trip Houston and CJ Abelló.” Music played, the crowd applauded, and CJ and Trip waved at the audience as they walked on stage. CJ recognized Christina Aguilera’s anti-bullying anthem “Beautiful,” but not the specific dance remix. He was familiar enough with the show to know the cool guests danced their way to the sitting
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The Guggenheim is an iconic structure panned by certain architectural critics early on. Many other famous buildings have suffered the same fate. I find it amusing those critics, similar to literature ones, end up with egg on their face when what they put down becomes loved and famous.
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@Jaro_423 There was so much I wanted to do with the series, the story arcs kept piling up. I'm pretty sure I've resolved all of them, although some have lingering effects. Owen and CJ's feelings toward him will become clearer pretty soon.
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@Jaro_423 So glad the suggestion to download worked! Because of an upcoming event, I needed to get the guys out of Virginia and moved to Washington. It'll become clear why soon enough. My parents bought their first house in Cuba when I was born next to their friends who became my godparents. Years later, when we moved to Miami, we did so at the same time as two other families Who were close friends. Three houses were bought in the same development. This is one of those cases where personal experience influenced what I did.
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@Jaro_423 I'm certain you'll figure out the reason I had the helicopter crash quickly. One of those life-changing events.
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@Jaro_423 I know some people download chapters so they can read offline. Maybe something to try? As you can figure out from other comments, having Brett's helicopter crash did not win me any fans LOL Hopefully you've figured out what happens by now.
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That feeling permeates the story. They might argue and fight, but the love always wins in the end.
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She's still a bitch and deserves pain. Also, she must be Canadian. She keeps saying 'sorry.'
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A little pregnancy, and she changes her tune? Doubtful. If she doesn't want to keep the rug rat...
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One of these days I'll find time to string enough chapters together. On to the next one.
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It's Hard to be a Saint in the City
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in It's Hard to be a Saint in the City
I've heard that before. Seems I close one story arc and open two. But I guarantee I eventually close them all. -
@Jaro_423 Mr. Google is always helpful. Did you ask him? I guess it's an American brand.
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Wait until you read the chapter about traveling in Israel.
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@Jaro_423 Thanks and thank you also for the typo corrections. Takes me a bit to fix since I'm taking the opportunity to correct comma placement at the same time. Lots of those to fix now that I have a better idea of how the rules work. LOL
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Someday We'll Be Together
Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Someday We'll Be Together
@Jaro_423 Got your PM and will deal with that issue in a bit. I try to use sex scenes to advance the story. Detailed when I think it's important enough, summaries and off-camera when secondary.
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