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    Growin' Up

    Sftoyou commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Growin' Up

    I love this story you are weaving. The cliffhanger is agonizing but it makes me anticipate the next chapter. But here is my "WHAT"moment .... I can't wrap myself around the idea that, with all these protective and wonderful men in CJ's life, how is it that he ended up alone in the Principles office when he heard the news. Based on what you have written so far, I think that if even one of them knew, they would have made sure CJ had some "family" there for support. Just a little part that made me tilt my head a bit. can't wait for spring!
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    Chapter 1

    Sftoyou commented on ShadowDancer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I love your other stories and was looking forward to reading this as well. The script font make it difficult on my eyes, so unfortunately I will not be bble to read it. You might want to change it to amore standard font.
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