Yes You need a editor.. I still think Penn is butt hurt and is totally in denial. I would be to if what Nash had done to me. At least Nash is trying to make admins, Penn is just being pig headed. I totally see them getting back together in Hawaii. It is written in the stars So to speak. I can wait til the next chapter. I hope there is more than one. There is so much more you can write about. Keep up the great work.