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  1. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Denial
  2. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    No wonder the town's broke, free wifi across town, and the library doubles as a spank bank... the lean up costs alone... yikes You know Kenny's Mom is the librarian.... that poor little Church lady....
  3. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Self-help section
  4. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Oh man, Orel's on a mission, it will be highly amusing to write Finn's reaction to Orel's ... declaration of intent via pizza.
  5. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Axl volunteers!
  6. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Kyle refuses to teach Orel that one.
  7. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    Orel approves this protocol, and recommends the hot-coco with marshmallow supplementary protocol
  8. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    There's a 89% chance of being snug
  9. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    I mean, Axl did get an eye full of naked Orel, so he's not exactly going home without a win... without his own pants, sure, but you know Axl'd think he won.
  10. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    you will never look at the ways and means committee hearings the same way again.
  11. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    tomorrow I promise. Lydia's turn
  12. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    :: smiles at you :: see what happens when you poke a writer mid flow? I blame you.
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    Chapter 14

  14. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 14

    the poor pizza boy
  15. Chapter 14: The Sausage Delivery Protocol Orel Merrick sat in his "golden cube" sanctuary behind the DeLorean, his laptop glowing with a level of frantic data acquisition that usually preceded a major taxonomic breakthrough. With his first "official date" with Finn Grady approaching, he had identified a catastrophic information deficit regarding the role-based protocols of physical intimacy. He had initially attempted a scholarly descent into the Kama Sutra and peer-reviewed studies o
  16. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    I'd be terrified, he'd whip me into shape in no time flat. I use @Seraph28 and @Paladin for beta reading, and they are great at it.
  17. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    just happen to be writing about Peter's Twin Brother today. Bobby.
  18. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 13

    I may or may not have been smoking a virtual cigarette and enjoying my afterglow... um, Doc and I share a wavelength, and he isn't afraid to call my BS when I screw up, so I enjoy chatting to him... Besides a healthy community is one that helps me be better as a writer. I make mistakes and screw up, I write FAR too fast some days. it means I overlook things, and get wrapped up in things that I forget others. You guys pointing out logical problems, helps me tighten the text down and fix errors. Also my editing software is a NIGHTMARE, it swaps text order around... it changes entire paragraphs behind my back... and has a nasty habit of editing gay relationships into "Brothers" the amount of times I have had to go back, and rewrite sections that have changed Orel and Finn to brothers with an UNHEALTHY sex life... LOL I swear, I hate computers. It's designed to generate text, not edit it properly... but without an editor I kind of have no choice but to rely on it... so you guys HELP a lot when there are errors to sort out.
  19. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    Just the knowing look shared by Graves and West. Well crap, this guy just tore me a new one, now it's your turn. We're enemies, but holy hell... no one deserves *that*
  20. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    Yeah, I am actually reading over the spend/raising figures right now, and it's mind boggling. Harris is interesting to examine, because in the scenario, she has already had her legs cut out from under her by Will. His move to delay accepting the VP nod, and getting the Democrats to do the heavy lifting for his Article Four challenge has done significant damage to the party, Biden's failure at the debate turned what should have been a simple cut, into a mortal wound. It's all a bit GoT at the moment.
  21. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    This is key, Will can deliver the North, what he needs is someone that can deliver the South. Jared needs to cover the money, and he's got one hell of a job even generating a fraction of the Republican war chest. Money is where the struggle is, we oft underestimate how much money the Republican Party has at it's disposal, its mind blowing the figures that they have at their disposal. It is something to respect, and regard with awe, Republicans are extremely proficient when it comes to money raising.
  22. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    a sneak peek:
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    Chapter 17

  24. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    We've all had ENOUGH We're tired
  25. Topher Lydon

    Chapter 17

    We knew it was coming, but I wanted a moment, one last moment where Will could just be a Dad. Tommy and Jacob are about to a massive amount of growing up facing what's to come. 15 is so very young to face that kind of thing.
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