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well wow... .. i guess the whole Alice moving to AZ went down the drain, huh? but damn.. this chapter made me cry a crapload... im such a sissy. i cried at the conversations between rory and luke, rory and jase, rory and eddie, and rory and seth... Seth is so charming... I Love Him... and Luke.. Luke is so hurt by all this that it pains me so. And then there's Eddie... i love what he said in the end.. I couldnt help but cry.. But yeah.. I was crying my ass off throught out this damn chapter.... amazing. I think this instrumental music has a lil something to do with it.

sweetness.. looks like there is still hope for LRITE peeps... well a lil.. anyway.. i really thought that people's guess about Alice moving to Arizona will never be.. but damn.. Dom never seaze to surprise me.. great chapter though.. 2 thumbs up! hmm Seth.. *giggles* It's hot here in texas too.. but many people know how to ice skate.. doesn't include me though..

I knew it was DAVE! well i guess some of my LRITE faith went down the drain.. and im kinda happy.. cause I like Seth. But sad cause.. poor Luke Anyway.. what the hell was up with that last comment? Geez.. talk about cliffhangers. Personally, though, I think Luke is going to say something about him not liking Seth for Rory.. or maybe he just feels jelous looking at a gay people because he doesn't have a boyfriend.. hmm i just want Luke to be happy.. i mean.. if he was real.. I'll take him. haha. Somewhere in this chapter.. I really got the feeling that Rory has cheater-tendencies... If he cheats on Seth.. I'll kill him.

i always play a piano instrumental.. lol from the soundtrack of an anime i love.. and it's very approriate for sweet/sad/romantic/touching moments in Dom's stories... ans because there are no words... i can focus on what I'm reading.

"I understand the difference between someone saying that they

Haha.. that's hilarious.. yep.. I really don't think that they'd appreciate that either lol.... *sigh*... i want a dog too.. but the Dorms dont let us have pets.. except for fish... and pfft... you can't pet a fish.. what's the point?

lol thanks you guys.. im really excited about Dennis' story.. can't wait. there were so many parts in TLW that i was balling and i couldnt help it.. then again.. that happened when i read the whole thing about Rory's mom (voice recorded incident) ... Hmm and the sad piano song that i keep playing over and over while reading the stories add up to it...

Jeezus! What a chapter! and i read somewhere here about the possibility of Rory cheating on Seth.. it's not unlikely.. knowing that rory is easily persuaded with charms and all that.. and obviously.. though he doesnt wanna admit it.. he still has a soft spot for Aaron. about Luke's mystery crush.. haha i loved when Seth said.. "You mean besides you?" Even he thinks it's Rory.. and I think so too.. there had been so much sexual tension between them from the very beggining.. and who knows.. if Rory does cheat on Seth.. it might be with Luke? Though i am kind of a Luke and Rory person... i dont think that would be good.. cause I like Seth.. He's a nice guy. Sweet and passionate.. and.. ok I'll stop.

uhh i just finished TLW and it was awesome.. loved it... my fave char was LACY.. for some reason lol anyway... one question.. i remember reading somewhere here in the forums that there is a story that is about Dennis Gordon.. like a TLW spin off.. am i imagining things? cause im kinda interested about the whole dennis thing.

Thanks for the advice about TLW you guys.. i just finished it... and it was amazing.... it's.. i don't know... im speechless.. and i LOVED LACY!! lol i know she's not a main character.. but i loved her.... then again i loved evryone in the story.. even the bad ones.. Dom.. you rock.

Im so torn... it's crazy... anyone have prozac?

Damn it.. i accidentaly clicked on chapter story when i voted. I'm a klutz. Anyway, out of all of those, "With Trust" is probably the best bet. "Crash" is ok.. though it's already the title of one of my fave movies and also.. it might be better as a title for one of the chapters.. like you said.. thatt's what we feel when we read chapter 1.. so it's probably a good idea to use "Crash" for chapter 1. I don't really know if even "With Trust" will stand out ... Desert Dropping caught my attention at nifty thoguh. that's why i started reading lol... and i promise.. nothing dirty came into my mind when i saw the title.. though when my straight friend asked me what i was reading.. and i told him the title.. he was like.. "ewww.. haha.. gay porn." I have nooooo idea. You could always name it "A Boy and the Canvas"

i agree!

oh sweetness!!! lol.. Gail.. red-headed midget...lol... hmm midget.. that word should offend me cause im short.. but.. heh. anyways.. it would really be nice if Rory and Luke end up together.. *sigh* i need to find a Luke for myself.. but a seth will do..haha

ohhhh so LRITE is a people who are for "Luke <3 Rory" hmm i really do want them together.. i had my suspicions about Seth's intentions.. but i dunno about it now... AHHHHHHHHHHHH im so confused!

Geez-us ... This chapter is incredible is so many different ways. And i think we've all noticed by now that Rory isn't the brightest kid in the world.. i mean seriously.. What's up with that? I think after Luke's little hints he'd be able to narrow it down to him and Dave... But i guess subconciously his mind is blocking any thought of Luke possibly liking him... because of the "best friend"-ish thing and all. I still have the feeling that Rory is the person Luke likes... I mean.. it's just a guess.. but the first time i made a guess when i read this story.. i turned out to be right... after the whole theatre thing with Seth, Aaron and Rory.. i said "Hmmm I think Seth will be with Rory after Aaron".. hah.. turns out i was right... I really did like it when they hooked up.. i dunno.. love stories that are very at-first-back-off-cause-i-despise-you-then-awwe-i-like-you-so-lets-be-together always seem very lovable nd interesting to me.. except for the thing with Luke.. cause his relationship with rory is not like that.. its one of those starts-out-as-friends-then-maybe-more-eventually kinda stories.. and i really wouldnt mind.. cause i love Luke... i wanna marry him. *sigh* next chapter wpuld be interesting and oh.. anyone here thinks that Seth was only making an excuse when he said the lube was only so they can wet hump eachother and not for uhhh "poking".. cause he saw Rory get all nervous and stuff? I really don't.. i thought it was sincere... but my Lesbian friend seem to think so.. P.S. what does LRITE mean?

Lol i guess you can have his babies.. kids don't tend to like me anyway. lol Glad to be here.. I've only read DD so far.. i fell in love... Im gonna start reading his other stories while i wait for DD's next chapter. Thanks for the welcome

Damn... that's awesome.. that's kinda how i picture seth in my mind..

(these are more like favorite incidents/scenes) DD Chapter 11: Aaron just smiled at that, and we both faced forward again, another silence coming over us. But, this time, it seemed comfortable, I think. Even when he leaned into me, our arms sticking together with a light layer of sweat. Maybe that

Addicted? shh.. no way.. i may be going crazy when there havent been a new update.. or when i giggle like a little girl when things happen in the story(DD).. like when Luke kissed Rory.. but im totally not addicted.......... .... im in love..... im gonna have to read Dom's other stories.. damn this guy is brilliant... ill marry him any day.