SanguineAffair

Eheheheheheheheheh. I love the Circle of Hell stories, I'm pretty excited about this.

Another beautiful story. Can't wait to see what happens with Nathan!

Well dang. That was unexpected, and fantastically hot. I seriously hope Becca gets over it in short order, she's starting to seriously grate at the nerves. When do we get to see her redeeming qualities? There has to be something good about her for Shas to marry her.

Best chapter yet, in my humble opinion.

I'm pretty sure the noises I just made were inhuman. I've been a relatively silent reader of late, but I'm still avidly here and I must tell you I greatly anticipate coming by here every day to see if you've updated things Sasha. This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Thank you for being a much needed bit of pleasantness in my world of late. <3

Loving it. I love stories with a charismatic bastard that you love to hate, and just want to see find some happiness. This story is rapidly climbing to the top of my favorites' list. Can't wait to see what's coming!

SCREW YOU I DIDN'T WANT TO CRY TODAY. D: (That was amazing, there are seriously tears.)

Perfection.

Oooh interesting.

That was so sweet I think I have diabetes now. Well done, and I want more.

Ah, denial. Good chapter my dear. So glad to see you writing for the hell boys again, I find myself oddly addicted to them. Not as much as the wolves mind you, but hey. We all have our favorites.

I think you should stay with Miah. Personally, I find it kind of awkward and clunky to switch between viewpoints, it's never been my favorite to read. If you're going to write first person, I think you should stick with one character. This has been a great read, and I can't wait to read more of it. You write sci-fi/fantasy so well, I love your work.

Best chapter yet.

I saw the parallel in your writing between bull riding and uh..ahem..other strenuous and enjoyable activities... It was cleverly written, I really enjoyed the way you played the middle ground so that it could sound like one thing, but was really entirely another. I almost didn't read it, honestly, because from the title I knew it would be about bull riding, which scares the crap out of me, but then I thought, "Eh, it's Sasha. I have to." I'm glad I did. ...Even if it did nothing to alleviate my fear of bull riding. haha

Really interesting take on bull riding. I loved it. Hard to breathe while reading it!

I just love this story so much. *happy sigh* Seriously. Are you considering trying to get hard copies of this book printed? Because if you do? Put me at the very top of the list to get one.

I'm really enjoying this story so far, but oh man. There are so many names! Is there any way you could put together a family tree or something that would make it easier to figure out who is who until we get to know them better? <3

God I love this story. *happy sigh*

I can't tell you how pleased I was to log in and discover you've brought this story here, at long last! I'm so excited to read it again, and be able to offer feedback without getting trolled by people. : D I hope you have a lovely new year holiday, my dear!

I really want them to adopt-a-hare and take him home so they can all be a happy family together.

Poor Luke! Why is it so much fun to be absolutely cruel to our characters? haha. Great chapter, Sasha. I'm..assuming at this point that they are, in fact, twins. Also, I think I forgot how to breathe thanks to your description of that kiss and where Luke wanted to take it. Well done! That doesn't often happen.

Ouch. : ( I am curious about one thing.. You said in one sentence that the boys were related, but not twins, and then in the next sentence refer to them as the twins. So, for my own clarification, they are not twins that is just how the narrator, ie Luke, thinks of them? Also, in regards to the comment about well-worn plot "ruts".... There's nothing new under the sun. It's all in how you tell the story. And frankly, that is all too common an occurrence in the really real world for gay kids, so tired and over-used or not, it's reality and therefore should not be so readily dismissed. Another great chapter, Sasha. You really do a fantastic job of catching the turbulent mentality of a teenager. I feel for Jeremy being outed, I really hope Luke's friends keep their pie-holes shut about him and that he and Luke eventually can be friends.

Good start, keenly interested already. I like that you chose to write this one in first person, it makes it very easy to connect to the characters right away. Nice touch with the slightly imperfect grammar, made it very believable that we're reading this from an intelligent, but still high school, boy's point of view.

I was pleased to see this. I don't think I've ever commented on your demon stories, but I do enjoy them. This gave a good, brief look at some of the ones we (or I, at least) don't know as well, which was pretty rad. I hope you plan on writing more for these soon, these and the Born Wolf series were what brought me to reading you in the first place. Also, Happy Halloween!

Great ending to the story. (I would choose the horse, too. Hands down, no hesitation. The only thing that would come before my horse is my kids. Anything else in the world will never be as important.)